TinyJarStoredDreams

Hey Tiny here! I love the imagery in this just to start this off. I don't really have any concerns expect for right here. A laugh like I wish I ...

Hey Tiny here! I just have a few suggestions for your wonderful poem:) I let the feelings of constriction that previously held me down float out of the passenger side ...

Hey Tiny here! I just have a couple nit picky things. :) I wish it was different, But it was given to me this way. And i guess that's the ...

Hey Tiny here! I just a few comments about this poem to help the over all flow. Hey I think I love you Maybe I do or maybe I don't ...

Hey Tiny here! Ready to be my next victim? Good. Alright this is written from a depressed/stressed/disappointed point of view. As a person with anxiety, I can relate to this ...

Hey Tiny here! I'm not really sure on why so many people are giving you hate on this. I feel like its more than just two lines. I still hate ...

Hey Tiny here! I just have few suggestions here for you today c: A light escaped from the Diamond. It erected a barrier around the witch. Her body was dissipating ...

Hey Tiny here! I agree with Fictional that it would be bit a more dramatic if the last line was separated from the rest of the poem. Also this could ...

Hey Tiny here! Well dang, that was deep. I loved how every stanza had the same amount of lines, sorry that's just a nit-picky thing. The only thing that this ...

Hey Tiny here! Okay first off this was really cute and I was easily able to enjoy it. The only thing I noticed was how you started using punctuation near ...

Hey Tiny here! I read through this a couple times and I couldn't find any mistakes so I have rewarded you by bolding all my favorite parts of this poem. ...

Hey Tiny here! This poem is actually really relatable for me, and I feel like it is for some other people too. I checked over a couple times and I ...

Hey Tiny here! I love how simple and sweet this is. Who knew 15 words could make a person feel so bubbly inside. I have one suggestion though, place a ...

Hey Tiny here! First off I would not be surprised if this made it into the literary spotlight, it is truly wonderful. I do have a couple suggestions though. On ...