TimmyJake

IT'S NOT A GIRLS NAME. xDD People keep saying that, and it can be both. So your sister is veryyy veryyy smart. You should listen to her. hmph. It reminds ...

YES, HE SHOULD DIE. Thank you for giving me that idea. :D Actually, I'll let the poor bloke live... probably. hehe Thank you for your compliments, and your thoughts. They're ...

Ohhhh... I see what you mean. Dang, you're getting good at spotting errors. xd Not fair. >> I will have to edit those out when I, um, get around to ...

I MISSED THIS. I'M SO SORRY. This is yet another of your reviews that really helps me. :') As they all do. You like Karsh best, too? xD Oh, I'm ...

That suggestion is perfect. I will have to implement it into the chapter when I do my edits. Sometimes my punctuation needs help. c: And thank youuuu for all those ...

YAY. I made someone laugh! Now that means I'm doing at least part of my job right. xD You like Reese-Peese? Decent stuff, it is. :p You know, people have ...

xD They made you read it? Heh, I'm glad they did. :') Thank you for the review, Rose. And I'm glad you enjoyed it. A chocolate war would be quite, ...

YES, that was something a few people have noticed so it's good you caught on. >> I didn't do a very good job introducing her as a girl, but more ...

I'll work on those paragraphs. c: And heehee, you love Karsh? He pretty cool, I guess. Avery was given to me by Deanie - it is a perfect name, isn't ...

Another amazing review.

Thank youuuuuu Yes, in the future edits, I'm going to use more description and longer sentences. I think that's one of my weaknesses, and eventuallyyyy, I will conquer it. xd ...

OH, what you said is very very true. I need to fix those. :) Especially the one about after the parenthesis and period, and I know that is incorrect. >> ...

Thank youuuu for this review. :') You go get some sleep. :p You've helped me quite a bit, as always. And your compliments make me feel so good.

Thank you for this continuing review, Selina. Your sister and you are my biggest fans here, it seems. :') Everything you said here will help me with my next chapter... ...

Evil grins are... evull. o.0 I withheld information in the earlier chapters. >> Sometimes unnecessarily, but often times just to irritate my readers. hehe. And you have nitpicks? Oh my. ...