TimmyJake

Timmyjake here to give you a short review on a short poem! First, I think that your first and second lines should be revised if they are to remain that ...

timmyjake here to give you a short review! First, normally in stories/books, numbers are always written out. An example would be: 5:30 and five-thirty or five o'clock. Something like that. ...

I really like your writing style! Timmyjake here to give you another review! I followed your advice and read another one. I love how your character feels everything so deeply. ...

Maybe you need to brush up on your knowledge of the Catholic faith, ravenlords. Timmyjake here to give you a review. Christmas is not pagan, but the pagan world has ...

Hmmm... Difficult, I find this. Lack of words, I find. Yes, yes, I know.. Exit Yoda, enter Timmyjake. This is meant to be a review, but I think that it ...

Timmyjake here to give you a short review! First of all, this prologue is awesome! So descript and brilliantly told! Its almost like I can see the whole seen play ...

Ok! I will give you a review as best I can. Timmyjake here, by the way. Ok, it sounds great. But what is that whole part in the beginning where ...

Timmyjake here to give you a review! First of all, your punctuation could use a little work. A typical sentence in this chapter is, ‘Mum what’s wrong he asked’ all ...

Timmyjake here to give you a review on Review Day! Actually, its still Saturday where I am at! Very nice chapter! I like how the characters go back and forth, ...

Nice first chapter! Timmyjake here to give you a short review! First, you tend to put some of your chapter in the present tense. She slides through the crowded hallways, ...

Wow, your chapter is very well done! Timmyjake here, giving you a review of some sort! Your story seems to be from the Ancient Egypt period. You do an excellent ...

Very passionate and deep poem... It is truly an awesome piece of poetry. The person is alone and thinking, wanting, hoping to speak to and be loved by his/her grandfather. ...

Timmyjake here to give you a review! (sort of) First of all, I've read quite a few teen novels and none of them had such high language as you have ...

That is a beautiful peom, AftertheStorm. Timmyjake here and I will try to give you a review as best I can. First question. Are those - signifying that it is ...

I don't know if it was the way you copied your prologue over or the way you wrote it, but everything seems scattered about. the one she was half shackled ...