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Re: The Doctor and the giant calling birds (Part 4 Twelve Days Before Christmas) *Edited*
Timmyjake to leave you a review! Once more I am ashamed. I have no idea who the doctor is, nor the Tardis. But.... I have a guess, due to the ...
Jan 5, 2014 -
Re: The first chill of winter
Timmyjake to give you a review! As Sophie said, this story has such beautiful and vivid metaphors. I can see exactly what is going on, and I can feel what ...
Jan 4, 2014 -
Re: The Moon
Timmyjake here to give you a review!! I saw this and I was like, Ahhhhh, first one!!! Like all of your poetry, this one is fantastic. It flows along beautifully, ...
Jan 3, 2014 -
Re: Invincible
Timmyjake to give you a review!! For being your first poem here, I am amazed by what this is like! I am in the works of making a poem to ...
Jan 2, 2014 -
Re: from polluted hearts and skyscrapers
Timmyjake to give you a short review! There isn't anything to critique really in this piece. It flows beautifully and has depth to it. I absolutely love your imagery! money ...
Jan 2, 2014 -
Re: Existence
Timmyjake to give you a review!! This was wonderful. You have a lot of talent! I can never muster enough courage to post any poetry or lyrics. To tell you ...
Jan 1, 2014 -
Re: Heroes Fall (chapt. 3 part1)
Timmyjake to leave you a review as promised! I love your writing style! You have a lot of talent with writing. Seriously. This chapter is just as good as the ...
Jan 1, 2014 -
Re: sweet summer
Timmyjake to give you a review, Smile!! This was so beautiful, like quest said. Not life changing, or deep, but light-hearted and happy. I love summer!! The only time in ...
Dec 31, 2013 -
Re: Blown Away
Timmyjake to write you a review! Hopefully I finish this in time for it to be counted! This story was amazing. I haven't ever listened to the song, I know. ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: The Hunger Games Fan Poem
Timmyjake to write you a review on Review day! The West Side Writers are trying hard to catch up! So I love hunger games. The series is probably my favorite ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: 58 Poppies
Timmyjake here to write you a review on Review Day! So this was really good! It seems to focus on everything 58, but also everything that is connected to those ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Watch
Timmyjake here to give you a review! So I don't actually agree with you that the trees are going away. Perhaps if you live in a big city, but I ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Mineralized
Timmyjake here to write you a review! So this was realllllllyyyyyy good! This review will be written with my alter-ego completely under control, so NOWORRIES!! This would make an awesome ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Openside
Timmyjake here! I thought I would review something of yours that wasn't in French. ;) So this was really good. Its kind of childish, but still having a solid backing ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: This In-Between
Timmyjake here to give you a review! This is perfect, no criticism required. You tell a big story, one that we all go through. Not an adult, but not a ...
Dec 29, 2013
