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TimmyJake

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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Supernatural Re: The Doctor and the giant calling birds (Part 4 Twelve Days Before Christmas) *Edited*

    Timmyjake to leave you a review! Once more I am ashamed. I have no idea who the doctor is, nor the Tardis. But.... I have a guess, due to the ...

    Jan 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The first chill of winter

    Timmyjake to give you a review! As Sophie said, this story has such beautiful and vivid metaphors. I can see exactly what is going on, and I can feel what ...

    Jan 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: The Moon

    Timmyjake here to give you a review!! I saw this and I was like, Ahhhhh, first one!!! Like all of your poetry, this one is fantastic. It flows along beautifully, ...

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Invincible

    Timmyjake to give you a review!! For being your first poem here, I am amazed by what this is like! I am in the works of making a poem to ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: from polluted hearts and skyscrapers

    Timmyjake to give you a short review! There isn't anything to critique really in this piece. It flows beautifully and has depth to it. I absolutely love your imagery! money ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Existence

    Timmyjake to give you a review!! This was wonderful. You have a lot of talent! I can never muster enough courage to post any poetry or lyrics. To tell you ...

    Jan 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Heroes Fall (chapt. 3 part1)

    Timmyjake to leave you a review as promised! I love your writing style! You have a lot of talent with writing. Seriously. This chapter is just as good as the ...

    Jan 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: sweet summer

    Timmyjake to give you a review, Smile!! This was so beautiful, like quest said. Not life changing, or deep, but light-hearted and happy. I love summer!! The only time in ...

    Dec 31, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Blown Away

    Timmyjake to write you a review! Hopefully I finish this in time for it to be counted! This story was amazing. I haven't ever listened to the song, I know. ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: The Hunger Games Fan Poem

    Timmyjake to write you a review on Review day! The West Side Writers are trying hard to catch up! So I love hunger games. The series is probably my favorite ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: 58 Poppies

    Timmyjake here to write you a review on Review Day! So this was really good! It seems to focus on everything 58, but also everything that is connected to those ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: Watch

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! So I don't actually agree with you that the trees are going away. Perhaps if you live in a big city, but I ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: Mineralized

    Timmyjake here to write you a review! So this was realllllllyyyyyy good! This review will be written with my alter-ego completely under control, so NOWORRIES!! This would make an awesome ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Openside

    Timmyjake here! I thought I would review something of yours that wasn't in French. ;) So this was really good. Its kind of childish, but still having a solid backing ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: This In-Between

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! This is perfect, no criticism required. You tell a big story, one that we all go through. Not an adult, but not a ...

    Dec 29, 2013


When a flower doesn't bloom, you fix the environment in which it grows, not the flower.
— Alexander Den Heijer