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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I am all but able to live.

    Timmy here for a quick review!! Wow, you sure get busy once you arrive! Welcome to YWS!! What a poem to start off with. Wow. I haven't left a review ...

    Feb 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The truth

    Timmy her for a quick review! So first, I should welcome you to the site! This is certainly an excellent piece to kickstart your time here! Your idea is amazing! ...

    Feb 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Satire Re: An Ode To 1980's Music

    Timmy here for a quick review! To be honest, I don't follow music. At. All. I have my few singers I like, and that is about it. But I found ...

    Feb 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Time

    Timmy here for a short review! So first off, I should welcome you to YWS!! So welcome! What a piece to start off with. Wow. I am pretty amazed by ...

    Feb 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Fantasy Re: Write the writer

    Timmy here for a review! I am at a loss at to what to say, really. This is extremely short. Some might say it is too short, but after reading ...

    Feb 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hawk's eye - Chapter Four; Part 2/2 Scrapped

    Timmy here for a review!! You will have to excuse me just a second. *Grunts and pulls hard* My super cape appears to be trapped in the door. There! Now, ...

    Feb 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hawk's eye - Chapter Four; Part 1/2 Scrapped

    Timmyjake here to the rescue!! (Well, I guess not. It sounds cool, anyway) You know how I review, so I will spare you the fluff and get down into the ...

    Feb 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Science Fiction Re: The Shifties: Chapter 2 - Nightmare

    Timmy here for a review, as requested!!! Thank you for telling me this was up. Mucho appreciated! Now, lets have a look at this! *evil laugh* Nitpicks She felt weary, ...

    Feb 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Cobra's Cage: Chpt. 3

    Timmy is here for a review! (As promised.) :D So you know my style of reviewing, so I will start right away! :D Nitpicks Haven't I told you a billion ...

    Feb 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Happiness and fright.

    Timmy here for a quick review! Wellllll.... I usually leave a longer review than this one will be, but what can I critique in a poem this good? It is ...

    Feb 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: broken

    Timmy here for a quick review! My goodness! I said I would review it, and then I completely forgot! Oops! I hope I am not in too big of trouble! ...

    Feb 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Science Fiction Re: The Shifties: Chapter 1 - Lost

    Timmy here for a review! So I have a specific style of review: I start out with just stating some nitpicks, and then I tell you the stuff I like, ...

    Feb 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Isn't it a game?

    Timmy here for a quick review!!(I always say quick , but it always turns into a long one. xD) A poem about snow. It might seem like everyone is doing ...

    Feb 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: you're all i need

    Timmy here for a quick review! You know my style of reviewing, so I will get started right away! Nitpicks it's february fourteenth valentine's day, ---That line doesn't flow very ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Icicle

    Timmy here for a quick review! You are SPECIAL! :D This is my two hundredth review! Yayayayayay!! So you can feel... honored. ;) Onto your review!! I promised I would ...

    Feb 14, 2014


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
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