TimmyJake

Timmy here! For youuuu, little sis. > I think the only reason why is that it completely spins the piece around and gives it a whole new focal point. It's ...

Hey, Margo! Stopping by here with a few of my thoughts on this piece. Yes, it is funny - or rather, in my opinion, has that potential. The idea you ...

Timmy here! I'm going to start this off as I've found myself doing a lot lately - grabbing a place and seeing where it takes me. As always, it's difficult ...

Here now. c: Allow me to get this troublesome thing out of the way~ No matter what they planned, he always seemed to know what was going to happen before ...

Here, again! c: This may very well be the shortest review I've ever given you, because there's nothing to critique! I'm reading through this, doing my best to find something ...

Timmy here! So I guess I'm going to be repeating what the others said a bit, but you should look over the first bits of this and consider taking out ...

Timmy here! This chapter was a good read - giving us more insight into Falyn's feelings towards what happened the day before, which was a good thing to have. About ...

oh dear. You are amazing. And I say that in the most upset, frustrated and angry manner possible. I mean, I don't know if I've ever been fooled this perfectly ...

Here now! Finally. xd Why there needed to be books in a training room, she had no idea. Now let's think about this for a quick moment, kay? She's doing ...

I is here This chapter is good - not quite as amazing as the previous chapter, but still quite fun to read. The conversation with Mina is one we've been ...

Timmy here! I'm going to go right into it~ Your sentences - lengthen them. I'm not saying using shorter sentences is a bad thing in writing. On the contrary, they ...

Noelle. When I review a chapter, I stop and make notes to remember for reviewing - perhaps not big things, but critiques I noticed. This is the first time with ...

Hello there. :3 I'll make this short and sweet, focusing on what you need to improve upon rather than too many of the good points, okay? *glances at watch* I ...

I am hereee So, um, I've never listened to the song before, and I'm not sure if it's one you'd approve of or not, and so I'll just leave it ...

I am hereeee Now this was... different. xd I was told this was an odd interpretation of the story, and while it is that, I love it! You effectively captured ...