TimmyJake

Timmy here! :3 While I see quite a bit of lovely description almost more fitting prose and poems than a short story (or just a very flowery short), there is ...

Timmy heeere :3 You're writing this ahead of time. o.o That's actually a very good idea, because then you won't ever miss your due time. And you won't have to ...

Timmy heeeere :3 It has been a long while since you posted, but I believe I have read this chapter, too. It seems very familiar, and the conversation between Avril ...

Timmy here I began this review with my hello on Review Day, but never did get around to it. These chapter reviews aren't what I prefer to write during that ...

Timmy here :3 One thing I am not seeing as much in this work, which you did talk about in your author’s note indirectly, is scene setting. I don’t really ...

Timmy here :3 Allow me to babble on for a moment, and skip my stereotypical introduction. As I go farther into this, past the chapters in Trevon and now probably ...

Timmy here :3 So in your spoiler thingy, you tell us that Rease dies. Well, I don't see this death you're talking about. Hmmm. >.< But a part of her ...

Timmy here :3 So I am just going to ignore the urge to start this off with my useless review introduction, and head straight into the important stuff. So the ...

Timmy here! :3 This piece is about as long as Return of the King, so I will just comment on it as I go, okay? And since I haven't read ...

Timmy here :3 Just to give you a heads up before I head into this piece, I have no past knowledge of your piece save for what's in here, so ...

Timmy here So, um, lyrics? I am going to try to review this piece because I can't have one piece of yours not reviewed by me and see if I ...

Timmy here :3 I feel like talking about Oni for a little while. Because she is important, and I don't think she is given enough attention. Not attention from Asenath ...

Timmy heeeere Let's think about this for a moment. Eight years have passed. And, from what I gather, Asenath hasn't left her little hovel on the back corner of her ...

Timmy here :3 So this chapter certainly seems to have a different feel to it. Asenath is not in the same environment she's been in for so long, and she's ...

Timmy here :3 Yeah, I know you already gave me a peak at this, and let me look at it for the tiny things that more irked me than were ...