Tikaya

Hahaha, I remember how vicious seagulls can be. Let’s see what this poem about them holds. And I love how you portrayed them as these cheeky sandwich stealers bc that ...

Okay, leave it to poetry to teach me more obscure words like “brumal” or “febrile”. I feel like they fit very well into the poem :3 I don’t know what ...

Well that is certainly a shocking way to start the story. Alright, I am here for our disabled future protagonist! And oh no, immediately we see the consequences, poor guy ...

Hi Mei! I don’t really know what to make out of this character profile. So I guess I share some thoughts. I think a feminist that hates men is a ...

Hi hello, I have reached your work in the Green Room so you shall have my review 😊 I wonder why “sleepy hollow” isn’t capitalized. Isnt that a town name? ...

Hi Alex, this time I’m reviewing some of your actual writing =D Annnd we head straight into my favourite topic: dialogue formatting. Here we go: ”[…] Please make her feel ...

Ah… I don’t like this font at all. I think it’s one of my absolutely least favourite ones. I shall read this in text format. I love this image: “We ...

I really like that this wizard comes across as appropriately mysterious :3 Loved that he left a gift for the baby :3 Found a small typo: “I’ll give you to ...

Time to earn that fifth start 😊 Hi hello! I come with a review! Hm I wonder what you mean by “tried aggression”. And we’re heading right into the dialogue ...

Here goes the next chapter. I hope it is as intriguing as the last one :3 I’m starting to worry a bit about Eliza. I had the thought that her ...

Hi hello! I’m here with a review 😊 My first thought is: oh no, is that the Green Knight from the Arthurian Legend? And is Eliza going to be forced ...

Ah I love the Korean translations. Whenever I see Korean I have to immediately think of Starcraft :3 I like this line: “Dad returns moments later and gives me a ...

Ah a poem ^^ First of all, I really like how the poem looks, how you play with text alignment and formatting 😊 I like that the italics part can ...

I rly understand the mom here, not wanting to have her son rely on a nightlight. Even if the circumstances are really extreme. Nevermind, she’s evil! Where did she abandon ...

Hmm I like how we get a clear voice for your MC right of the bat. I just don’t understand why they’d be confused abt what their own home town ...