Tikaya

Alrighty, final review of the day 😊 Hi dove! Oh I think from the first few lines that this could be abt having a panic attack? No air to breath, ...

Hey there! I have kinda read the first chapter so I am here for your second one now! That said, let me quickly say something abt ch1: Starting a story ...

The Green Room is doing weird stuff again so I want to try something by lifting this poem out of it. Aww I like the idea of the poem, of ...

So. The unreliable Green Room keeps sorting this poem to the bottom of the list. It might be a sign that I should prioritise it xd Oh I find this ...

Then let’s look at this old poem 😊 And I’m trying to follow the advice I got on reading poetry ^^ Okkkkayy uhm. Space angels. Somehow, that makes me think ...

Hmmm curious why this is under poetry. I also wonder what exactly the difference between a table and a desk is in this case. Table is when ppl share it? ...

Ahhhhh everything is bold. Not good not good! I like legion offering to simulate shield failure :3 I find it v weird that the new arrival didn’t immediately report to ...

2 more to go. Here we are! Hmm my issues continue: time line unclear, no info on how much and why the MC knows abt his own mission, reeepeetitions. But ...

Well there’s a year between this chapter and the last one I read so let’s see if there are improvements. I do enjoy Legion and James interacting. Good dynamic. Could ...

Hui, long chapter. Alrighty. First question is obviously: Why was Legion even offline in the first place? Excellent, James is also wondering that! Hmmm I feel this line comes too ...

Next chapter~ Oh back in flashback territory, this is going to be good! Maybe now we find out why Ricardo had to die… Ok this sentence is confusing: “Before James ...

So… I dunno how I missed this. But I almost missed this! I wasn’t quite vibing with the first stanza. Might be because “within me” and “thick to see” doesn’t ...

Took a bit of a break but I am back for more ^^ And we are going straight into the nitpicks. What a wonderful afternoon to complain abt small things ...

Green Room sorting is, as always, working exactly as intended. No worries @.@ Alrighty, will do the last chapter in this folder too, so here goes 😊 Last time in ...

Hey there. Finally reached November to properly follow this story. So. Last time, the poor kitten was left outside alone and then picked up by medical men. AH no. He’s ...