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After wrapping up a few final details with Sergio, James double-checked that the man still had the spare key to his apartment. Sergio held it up with a grin, letting the brass glint beneath the overhead light before slipping it back into his pocket.
“Funny how the old lock-and-tumbler system’s still in use,” he said. “Even in a world run by smart doors and retinal scanners.”
James smirked faintly. “Some things never go out of style.”
“Yeah. Sometimes simple works best.” Sergio clapped him on the shoulder, the gesture equal parts camaraderie and farewell. His expression softened, the grin easing into something more earnest. “Don’t get yourself killed out there.”
“Working on it,” James replied, tone dry but steady.
They shared a short laugh before parting ways—Sergio disappearing into the flow of Titan’s night traffic, while James turned toward home. For a fleeting second, James let his gaze follow the streak of light from the mag-strips overhead, thinking how easily a whole life could vanish into the city’s endless rhythm. Then he shook the thought off and kept moving.
His apartment wasn’t much—a cramped unit in a weathered housing block, more utility than comfort. But James had always kept it as his waypoint between missions. Four walls, a roof, a lock that still answered to a brass key. It was the closest thing he had to stability, a reminder that life wasn’t only missions and debriefs. Even if he lived it in fragments, this space anchored him.
Inside his neural interface, Legion stirred, her voice buzzing softly in his mind, smooth and edged with mockery.
“You know,” she said, “with all the advanced technology at your disposal, you’d think you’d upgrade to something better than this shoebox of an apartment.”
James kept his face neutral as he climbed the stairwell. Not everything needs to be cutting-edge, he thought back.
“Clearly. But I still don’t understand your attachment to primitive locks. That door of yours could be bypassed in seconds.”
And that’s exactly why I don’t want you touching it, James replied as he reached the door and slid the key into the lock. The tumblers clicked with satisfying weight, solid and real.
“Paranoid.”
Disciplined, he countered, stepping inside and letting the door shut behind him.
The checklist began, as it always did: methodical, deliberate, each step ingrained like drills he’d never unlearn.
First stop: his landlord. The man didn’t ask questions—he never did. Years of tenants cycling through had taught him that silence was safer than curiosity. Still, he gave James a solemn nod when told the apartment was to remain untouched.
“Stay safe out there,” the landlord said, raising two fingers in a lazy salute.
James returned a faint half-smile and left it at that. No explanations. No details. That was the rule.
Back inside, the tedious part began. Accounts needed freezing. Beneficiaries needed updating. Emergency contacts verified, signed, and re-signed. Bureaucracy James despised—not because it was hard, but because it forced him to confront what might happen if he didn’t return.
“Do you really need to do this manually?” Legion’s voice cut in, laced with false innocence. “I could handle it in seconds. Faster. Cleaner.”
It’s protocol, James reminded her.
“Protocol,” she scoffed, “is just another word for inefficiency.”
James exhaled slowly through his nose, refusing to rise to the bait. He’d long since learned that Legion always wanted the last word, and usually got it. Instead, he focused on the forms, line after line, as if discipline alone could anchor him against the weight of possibility.
By the time he finished, Titan’s skyline had shifted into its nighttime spectrum. The light outside had cooled into hues of blue and silver, reflecting across rain-slick streets. From his balcony, James paused to take it in. The monorail glided silently overhead, its whispering hum blending with the murmur of late-night vendors and the glow of neon signs.
For a rare moment, he let himself breathe, letting the city wash over him. The sound, the color, even the smell of ozone and wet concrete—it grounded him in ways the battlefield never could.
Legion broke the quiet. “Your errands are complete. Shall I log this mission under Operation Tedious Chores?”
James smirked faintly, slipping on his helmet. You don’t get to name missions.
“Noted. But you can’t stop me from keeping it in my personal logs.”
You’re insufferable.
“And yet indispensable,” she replied smugly.
The engine of his bike growled to life beneath him. As James guided it into the street, the city’s noise blurred into the background. The checklist was finished. The loose ends tied off. Soon, this apartment, this city, and all its trivial details would be little more than memory.
The countdown loomed, and with it, the mission ahead.
The last item on James’s list wasn’t in any protocol sheet—it was personal. Securing his bike.
It wasn’t just a machine. It was the one thing in his life that felt purely his, untouched by orders or mission specs. A piece of freedom, a shard of identity, and the closest thing to home he carried between deployments.
The base’s storage facility was quiet, climate-controlled air humming faintly as the heavy doors slid open. Rows of gleaming lockers stretched down the corridor, each designed to cradle machines worth far more than sentiment. James guided the sleek motorcycle inside, its engine’s low purr reverberating until he cut the ignition.
He swung a leg over and dismounted slowly, as though dislodging himself from something more than leather and steel. For a moment, he simply stood there, gloved hand resting on the tank, feeling its fading warmth.
“All this effort for two wheels and an engine,” Legion mused, her tone somewhere between bemusement and indulgence. “You treat it like an altar.”
It’s not just a bike, James thought back, setting his helmet gently on the seat. It’s a reminder.
“A reminder that you’re flesh and bone? That you like the illusion of control when you twist a throttle?”
James ignored the jab, sliding the key fob beside the helmet with deliberate care. The placement felt ceremonial, a ritual of leaving something important behind.
He tapped the console to confirm the service request: tank drained, fluids cycled, machine prepped for indefinite safekeeping. The screen flashed green.
Legion’s voice softened, almost curious. “Do you ever wonder if you’ll ride it again? Or if each farewell is the last?”
James lingered a moment longer before stepping away. I don’t plan on making this goodbye permanent.
“Plans are fragile things,” she murmured. “But I’ll log your optimism.”
He gave the bike one final look, then turned sharply, boots ringing against the polished floor. The door sealed behind him, leaving the machine in silence—an artifact of freedom locked away while duty pressed forward.
As he stepped back into the night air, James paused, glancing over his shoulder for the third time. That was when the silence of the lot shattered. A resonant hum filled the air—not just any engine, but the unmistakable growl of a hydrogen-powered behemoth. Sleek and modernized, it still carried the DNA of its rugged ancestor. The vehicle rolled into the facility like a mechanical predator, its reinforced chassis gleaming under the overhead lights. The turret perched on top gave a lazy swivel, scanning its surroundings as though it had a mind of its own.
The door hissed open, and out stepped Sergeant Major Lucas Conrad—larger than life and just as grizzled as James remembered. His voice boomed across the storage facility, carrying the authority and energy of a man who’d spent a lifetime shouting over gunfire and chaos.
“Well, well, well! If it isn’t the illustrious Captain James Hunter!” Conrad bellowed, his words dripping with mock grandeur. “What are the odds? Catching you at the enlisted men’s storage facility, no less!”
James smirked, turning to face the man who’d been both a thorn in his side and an unexpected ally more times than he could count. “Sergeant Major,” James said lightly, inclining his head. “Still driving that monstrosity, I see.”
Conrad slapped the side of the vehicle affectionately, producing a metallic clang. “Monstrosity? This beauty is a Hydro-X1. Hydrogen-powered, fully armored, and sporting a plasma-cooled turret. She’s built to last—unlike that fancy tin can of a bike you’re so attached to.”
James raised an eyebrow. “I’m surprised they still let you Marines keep toys like that.”
“Oh, they don’t,” Conrad replied with a grin. “But lucky for me, the Valorant has eight of these beauties tucked away in the cargo hold. Well…” He paused for dramatic effect, smirking. “Technically now seven, because I’m borrowing one. Told them it’s for research.”
James chuckled, shaking his head. “You ‘borrowed’ a multi-million-credit vehicle? And they bought the ‘research’ excuse?”
Conrad spread his arms, grinning wider. “I’m very convincing when I want to be. Plus, who’s gonna tell a Marine Sergeant Major no?”
James crossed his arms, leaning casually against the edge of the storage unit. “So, what brings you here, Sergeant Major? Surely not just to give me a hard time.”
Conrad’s grin softened, though his presence didn’t. He stepped closer, voice dropping into something steadier, heavier. “Checklist complete?”
James nodded. “Bike’s squared away. Only thing left is Rear Admiral Jackson. One more ceremony. Swearing back in. Accepting the commission again.”
Conrad studied him—not as a subordinate, not even as a fellow officer, but as a man. Then he clapped James hard on the shoulder, the gesture both grounding and reassuring.
“It’s a big deal, James. Not just for you. A lot of folks out there are counting on you to lead again.”
James met his gaze, voice steady though weighted. “I know. That’s why I’m here.”
Conrad’s grin returned, tempered now with pride. “Good. Because you’ve got this. And if anyone doubts it…” he jerked a thumb at the Hydro-X1 behind him, “…you just send ’em my way.”
Then he gave James a long look, head tilting as his eyes swept from boots to collar. “But first things first—we’ve got to get you out of those BDUs. Sorry, Hunter, but you’re Navy now. Jackson isn’t going to want a Captain reporting in looking like he just crawled out of a field exercise.”
James smirked faintly, tugging at his sleeve. “What, you don’t think she’ll be impressed with mud stains and frayed cuffs?”
Conrad barked a short laugh. “Save the grit for the battlefield. Tonight? You’re the poster boy. Whites pressed, medals polished, cap squared—just like those damn recruitment vids you used to star in without even knowing it.”
James rolled his eyes, but the smirk lingered. “You make it sound like theater.”
“That’s because it is theater,” Conrad said bluntly, clapping him on the shoulder again. “And trust me—you want to play the part right. The Admiral’s waiting, and you don’t want to keep her tapping her foot with that ceremonial sword in hand.”
James drew in a slow breath, the weight of it sinking in. “Fair point. Lead the way, Sergeant Major.”
Conrad jerked his thumb toward the Hydro. “That’s what I like to hear. Cleaners first, ceremony after. Let’s make you look like the Navy’s golden boy again.”
The Hydro rumbled quietly down the main road, its hydrogen engine humming low as Conrad guided it toward a squat, utilitarian building set apart from the admin district—the base cleaners.
James stepped out of the armored vehicle, boots striking the pavement with deliberate calm. The front clerk—a pale, nervous man who looked like he hadn’t slept in two days—straightened immediately when he spotted the name on the claim tag.
“Pick-up for J. Hunter?” the man stammered, already fumbling through the rack.
“That’s me,” James said evenly.
The clerk produced the uniform with both hands, handling it like fragile glass. The crisp whites gleamed under the fluorescent lights, every fold sharp, every seam pressed. Medals winked faintly in the glow, the gold chain of office draped neatly across the hanger.
“May I use your restroom?” James asked.
The man nodded mutely, stepping aside.
Inside, James shut the door behind him and stared at his reflection in the cracked mirror. Piece by piece, he shed the camouflage utilities and pulled on the dress whites. The fabric was stiff at first, unyielding, but as each button found its place, as each crease aligned, the transformation took hold.
The gold chain settled against his shoulder, catching the light. The medals shone in a neat row across his chest, small fragments of pain and sacrifice polished into symbols. Against the stark white, the scar carved across his face seemed even sharper, a reminder of the battles behind him.
When he adjusted the cap and met his own eyes in the mirror, the effect was undeniable. The man staring back wasn’t just James Hunter. He was Captain James Hunter, United Earth Navy. Flesh and steel, discipline and resolve.
Power, distilled into uniform and bearing.
Stepping back into the shop, James caught the clerk doing a double take—eyes darting from the uniform to the hulking Hydro idling outside.
“Uh… Captain?” the man asked hesitantly. “Isn’t there a reg against driving armored, armed vehicles on base during peacetime? Especially at night? Unless you’re headed for the firing line?”
James gave a faint smile, adjusting the chain across his shoulder. “Yeah, there is. But let’s just say it’s urgent that I get to my swearing-in ceremony.”
The clerk blinked, unsure if he should press further, then wisely stayed quiet. James pushed open the door, the night air rushing in as he stepped back toward the waiting Hydro.
Conrad was leaning against the armored vehicle, arms crossed, but the moment James stepped out in full dress whites he snapped to attention and fired off a crisp salute, his face a perfect mask of ceremony.
James returned the salute with equal sharpness—then let the corner of his mouth curl into a smirk. “Smart ass.”
Conrad dropped the pose instantly, his grin breaking through as he swung the door open for him. “Couldn’t resist, Captain. You clean up too well to waste the opportunity.”
James shook his head, sliding back into the Hydro. “Just drive before you start quoting recruitment vids.”
The vehicle rumbled back onto the main road, headlights cutting across the damp pavement. Neither man spoke much on the ride, the silence carrying its own weight. Titan’s city lights gave way to the sterner geometry of the base, floodlamps casting long shadows across the parade grounds. Ahead, the hall rose against the night like a slab of iron and glass, its broad doors thrown open, light spilling into the darkness.
Conrad eased the Hydro to a stop at the entrance. He glanced over, his expression losing some of its levity. “Well… you know what they say. One last deep breath before the plunge.”
James exhaled slowly, hand brushing the medals on his chest as if to remind himself of the cost each one carried. “Yeah,” he murmured. “Let’s get it done.”
He stepped out, boots striking the polished stone walkway with deliberate calm. The hall loomed before him, its light and shadows colliding in sharp contrast. Every step closer drew him deeper into the gravity of the moment.
James walked into the hall, the air heavy with a mix of ceremony and expectation. The decorations were sparse—banners hastily hung, a few flags unfurled—but the weight of the moment made the space feel grander than it was.
“Room, atten-TION!” Rear Admiral Jackson’s voice cracked like a whip the second he crossed the threshold.
Every soldier, sailor, and Marine in the room snapped to attention, boots striking polished tile in perfect unison. The sound reverberated like a drumbeat, sharp and disciplined, a thunderclap welcoming him into the spotlight.
James paused just inside the doorway, surveying the scene. Cameras swung on their rigs to track him from every angle, bright floodlights bleaching the hall into something surreal. He could feel the press hounds—the urchins—leaning forward in their seats, ready to feast on every twitch, every syllable. The Department of Defense had clearly staged this as more than a handover of command. It was theater. Propaganda. The poster boy of the UEG reclaiming his mantle.
But he had insisted on one condition: this show wasn’t for the networks, or for the bureaucrats hunched over in their offices across Titan. If there had to be a spectacle, then it would happen here, in front of the very men and women he would be leading. They deserved to see him step into the role with clear eyes, not just as a headline.
Three years. It had been four years since he last wore a captain’s uniform—four years since that trigger pull had shattered his career and carved his name into whispered debates about fitness and failure. Some had wanted him gone for good. Others had fought for his return. None of it mattered now. The board had ruled. The Admiral had signed. The uniform was back on his shoulders. And it was time—time to prove he belonged in it again.
The aisle stretched ahead of him, long and narrow, a gauntlet of eyes and expectation. James drew a slow breath, squaring his shoulders, his internal monologue steadying his stride.
I am an officer of the United Earth Navy. This is my duty. I took an oath—and today, I reaffirm it.
Each step rang out on the floor, deliberate, measured. His posture was flawless, but his mind was alive with the hum of thought, the old rhythm of command returning with each pace.
Legion, he thought inwardly. The urchins want a show. What do you think about a good old-fashioned marching cadence? Something with some weight to it.
The AI’s voice slipped into his mind like static resolving into clarity, calm and unhurried. I’ve got one. Old. Traditional. It fits the moment. Gravitas with a side of steel.
James’s lips curved into the faintest smirk. He straightened his shoulders again, just slightly, a motion deliberate enough to draw the eye. Then he called on an old voice, the voice that had once carried across parade grounds and training fields—a voice that could cut through chaos and make recruits snap to attention.
When he spoke, the hall seemed to narrow around his words.
“By the weight of the chain of gold I wear upon me—”
Step. Click.
His boots struck the floor like a metronome, the sharp cadence echoing through the chamber.
“By the white of the cloth about my body bound—”
Step. Click.
The rhythm was precise, deliberate, as though the march itself carried the weight of ceremony.
“By the spurs upon my heels, I do swear upon my honor—”
Step. Click.
The crowd was silent now, caught in the orbit of his presence. Officers, Marines, even the restless press leaned forward instinctively, their eyes locked on him. For a moment, the cameras were forgotten; even the urchins seemed to realize they were witnessing something greater than spectacle.
James’s voice didn’t rise into a shout, but it carried that old drill-sergeant resonance, deep and commanding—a sound that settled into the marrow and refused to be ignored. Each phrase struck like a hammer. Each step reinforced the oath already written into the blood of every man and woman in uniform.
The hall held its breath. Lights glared, cameras blinked, but none of it mattered. The march, the cadence, the promise—it silenced everything else.
By the time James reached the stage, the air hummed with anticipation. He paused, sweeping his gaze across the sea of faces before turning to Rear Admiral Jackson with a nod that spoke louder than words: this moment wasn’t for him alone, but for everyone who would follow him into the unknown.
Jackson stepped forward, her polished demeanor unshaken, though there was a flicker of amusement in her eyes. Leaning just close enough for him to hear, she quipped, “When you said ‘song and dance,’ I didn’t think you meant literally, Captain.”
James allowed himself the faintest, mischievous smile—a what are you going to do about it? kind of look. His posture remained razor-sharp, but the glint in his eye was equal parts defiance and charm.
Jackson straightened, her expression smoothing back into formality. When she turned to the room, her voice carried like a trumpet call. “Captain James Hunter, you stand before us today to reaffirm your oath to the United Earth Navy and accept command of the Valorant. Do you swear to uphold your duties and lead with honor, integrity, and unwavering resolve?”
James pivoted to face the assembled crowd. His voice was steady, resonant, and clear. “I do.”
A satisfied smile tugged at Jackson’s lips. “I knew you would.”
Then her voice sharpened, taking on the crisp edge of her drill-sergeant days, filling the hall without need of amplification. “Captain Hunter—repeat after me.”
James nodded, eyes locked on hers. She began the oath, each line deliberate, each word reverberating.
“I, state your full name, do solemnly swear…”
“I, James Orion Hunter, do solemnly swear…”
“That I will support and defend the Charter of the United Earth Government against all enemies, foreign and domestic…”
James echoed his, conviction steady.
“That I will bear true faith and allegiance to the same…”
“That I take this obligation freely, without any mental reservation or purpose of evasion…”
“And that I will well and faithfully discharge the duties of the office to which I am appointed…”
Finally—“So help me God.”
James repeated it, unwavering: “So help me God.”
The words hung in the air like a benediction. For a heartbeat, the hall was utterly still.
Then movement at the side drew every eye. Sergeant Major Lucas Conrad stepped forward, his Marine Corps dress uniform immaculate, rows of medals gleaming like fragments of history across his chest. His presence was so commanding that murmurs in the crowd died instantly.
In his hand, gleaming under the lights, was the insignia of James’s rank. Conrad reached James with unhurried steps, saying nothing at first. He affixed the insignia with precise care, his hand lingering just long enough to convey both pride and acknowledgment.
Leaning close, his voice dropped to a private register. “You earned this, James. Every damn bit of it. You may have switched uniforms, but you’re still a Marine.”
Before James could respond, Conrad smirked—and balled his fist. With a sharp, practiced motion, he punched the insignia flat against James’s chest.
A collective gasp rippled through the hall. James didn’t flinch. He knew the tradition, the camaraderie. The punch wasn’t cruelty—it was a rite. A reminder of the weight now resting on his shoulders, and the trust that came with it.
Conrad stepped back, his grin widening. “Don’t make me regret this, Captain.”
James adjusted the insignia once, then met Conrad’s gaze with a flicker of tempered amusement. “Wouldn’t dream of it, Sergeant Major.”
Applause erupted like thunder, the hall shaking with it. Cameras flashed, the insignia gleamed, and James stood tall in the center of it all—no longer just a poster boy, but a captain reborn.
The Hydro rolled across the tarmac, headlights cutting through scattered pools of light. Around them, the airfield was alive with late-shift activity: cargo haulers trundled in neat formation, floodlights swept in slow arcs, and the Valorant loomed larger with every passing second. Its armored hull gleamed under the glow, a predator waiting to be unleashed.
James took in the sight with quiet gravity. “There she is,” he said, almost to himself.
Conrad gave a low whistle. “Whole damn fleet could hide behind her. Hope you’re ready to keep her teeth sharp, Captain.”
James smirked faintly. “Guess we’ll find out.”
Legion stirred in his neural interface, her tone equal parts smug and impatient. Finally. You know, Captain, I’ve been waiting all night for this.
James rolled his eyes inwardly. Patience, Legion. You’re going to have to learn some if we’re going to work together.
Patience? she scoffed. Right after you humans learn to process data at light speed.
Conrad caught James’s fleeting expression. “Talking to your imaginary friend again, Captain?”
“Something like that, Sergeant Major,” James said dryly.
Conrad waited in queue for the dockmaster to wave them through, the Hydro’s engine idling low and steady. He leaned back in the driver’s seat, eyes narrowing at the bustle of loaders, forklifts, and crew ahead. “So,” he asked casually, “what do you think they’ll have us doing out there, Captain?”
James didn’t answer right away. He knew more than most—details buried under layers of clearance and stamped classified. The Valorant wasn’t just another warship. The new FTL drives alone were enough to change the balance of power, not to mention the shield systems whispered about in closed circles. And then there was Legion—her integration made the ship unlike anything else in the fleet. Thinking of her was enough to stir the AI, like tapping glass to wake something lurking below the surface.
Her voice didn’t come through the neural link this time. Instead, it
rolled out of the Hydro’s comms, bright and cocky in a way only an AI could
manage:
“Oh, all kinds of fun shit.”
The Hydro dipped slightly as it climbed the lip of the cargo ramp. Ahead, the bay doors yawned open like the jaws of a beast, swallowing them into the cavernous interior of the Valorant.
“What the fuck was that?” Conrad barked, eyes darting around the cab.
James groaned and dragged a hand down his face. “Legion…”
“Not what—who,” the AI corrected, her voice dripping with theatrical charm. “Hi, Sergeant Major. I’m Legion.”
Conrad stared at the dash, jaw slack. “You’ve got to be kidding me.”
James just sighed, already regretting what came next.
Inside, the Valorant’s hangar buzzed with orchestrated chaos. Forklifts wove between stacked containers, crew shouted codes over headsets, and engineers hunched over diagnostics tablets, their faces lit by the glow of status screens. Clanks, hisses, and sharp confirmations blended into a steady rhythm—the heartbeat of a warship preparing for launch.
Conrad’s eyes darted across the bustling deck as he guided the Hydro toward its assigned berth. “All right,” he muttered, half to himself, “someone explain to me who the hell Legion is and how she’s hijacking the Hydro’s comms. This thing’s running a hardened comm package. The amount of encryption on it…” He shook his head. “I don’t even have the degree to describe it.”
Before he could finish, Legion’s voice cut across the Hydro’s speakers,
rich with self-satisfied amusement.
“Oh, please. That’s child’s play. Especially when I helped write it.” Her tone
shifted into a playful lilt. “I’m not exactly normal, Sergeant Major. I’m an
AI.”
Conrad’s hands tightened on the wheel. “An AI?” He shot James a look. “You’re telling me this bucket of bolts has a stowaway AI that can crack a military comm package like it’s a crossword puzzle?”
James dragged both hands down his face in a double facepalm. “I was supposed to brief the crew about the presence of an AI after we left orbit, Legion. After. Thanks for that.”
“You’re welcome,” she replied sweetly, absolutely unrepentant.
The Hydro’s armored tires hit deck plates with a resonant thud. Dockhands turned at once, irritation flashing across their faces—until James stepped down from the cab. His uniform gleamed under overhead lights, insignia sharp, presence undeniable. The irritation evaporated into silence, then quickened back into purposeful motion. They knew their new captain when they saw him.
Before ether man could speak, Legion’s voice cut sharply across the comms—formal now, deliberately pitched for authority:
“Attention crew: Dust-off scheduled for 0200 hours. Engine readiness at ninety-five percent. Shakedown complete; minor systems flagged for recalibration post-departure. Last-minute loading at eighty-seven percent. Duty stations manned. Remaining tasks: finalize cargo security checks and confirm tactical systems readiness. Full operational status expected by T-minus thirty minutes.”
Heads turned toward the overhead speakers, but no one hesitated. Forklifts whined, clamps slammed, and voices carried across the bay as the crew adjusted with practiced efficiency. The tempo sharpened; Legion had just tightened the screws.
James tilted his head back, muttering, “Show-off.”
Her response brushed across his thoughts, playful and unapologetic. Who, me? Just trying to make a good impression.
“Maybe tone it down,” James warned, his voice low. “You’re making me look bad.”
Captain, Legion purred through his neural link, I am the ship. This is what I do.
James shook his head, tugging at his gloves. “Just don’t make them feel like you’re watching their every breath.”
Relax, she replied. To most of them, I’m just a very efficient, slightly unnerving voice. A voice that gets things done.
James and Conrad were still standing beside the Hydro when the speaker
crackled again. Legion’s voice, this time projected aloud, rolled through the
cab with almost theatrical precision.
“And for the record, Sergeant Major,” she said, “I’m not a stowaway on the
ship. I am the ship.”
Conrad froze mid-step, his glare snapping toward the dash. “What the hell—?!” He actually took a half-step back as if the armored vehicle had sprouted fangs.
James chuckled, pinching the bridge of his nose. “Legion! We just talked about this.”
“Patience and AI don’t mix, Captain,” she quipped, her tone full of faux apology. “Besides, I couldn’t resist.”
Conrad jabbed a finger at the console, his voice a mix of disbelief and grudging amusement. “Is this what I’ve got to deal with now? An AI with a sense of humor?”
“You’ll learn to love me,” Legion chirped brightly. “And for the record, Sergeant Major, I prefer ‘highly advanced neural construct.’ AI sounds so… impersonal.”
James turned toward the command lift. Conrad fell in beside him, muttering low. “She always like this?”
Conrad grumbled something unrepeatable and stepped clear as the dock crew moved in. At a sharp gesture from the quartermaster, recessed clamps hissed from the deck, locking onto the Hydro’s chassis. Harness arms unfolded from ceiling and floor, snapping tight around its armored frame with heavy clunks. Indicator lights flipped red to amber, then green as the quartermaster barked confirmations:
“Clamp one secure—green. Clamp two—green. Suspension locked—green.”
The precision was near ceremonial. James thought of old UEG training vids—vehicles locked down like precious relics before a jump.
Conrad crossed his arms, jaw tight, daring anyone to mishandle his “research project.” When the last light glowed green, he gave a curt nod. “Good. Last thing I need is her rattling loose like a crate of ammo.”
James nodded to the quartermaster. “Get it logged in the manifest. Officially.”
“Aye, Captain,” the man said, stylus already flicking across his pad. “Vehicle secured and recorded.”
“Always,” James said dryly, smirk tugging at his mouth. Then, louder, over his shoulder: “Sergeant Major—make sure they treat your ‘research project’ like it’s actually worth the paperwork.”
Conrad snorted, peeling away to bark orders at deckhands while James entered the lift. The noise of the bay dulled as the doors slid shut, leaving him alone with his reflection in the polished steel panel.
For the first time that night, James allowed himself a quiet breath. Legion’s voice coiled back into his mind, softer now, intimate.
Ready for the real fun, Captain?
James straightened, tugging his uniform into place. His reflection stared back—sharp lines, polished insignia, weight of command settling on his shoulders.
“Legion,” he said softly, “the fun’s just getting started.”
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Well there’s a year between this chapter and the last one I read so let’s see if there are improvements.
I do enjoy Legion and James interacting. Good dynamic.
Could work with Italics to highlight what James is thinking specifically at Legion.
Feels very weird to read this description after the dude showed up like, at most a day earlier in-story: “larger than life and just as grizzled as James remembered.”
Hmm I am continuously baffled by the tight time line @.@
Ya know if you were consistent in how the narration refers to your MC, then this would hit harder: “wasn’t just James Hunter. He was Captain James Hunter“
I like this: „four years since that trigger pull had shattered his career and carved his name into whispered debates about fitness and failure.”
Oh interesting ceremony!
Ok now in part 3, they are communicating through italics, silently? oô
I do like that the AI that can be everywhere at once is called Legion. Only now caught that. Me slow.
Hmm what happened to Legion trying to be more formal oô
Tho I especially like this: “I’m just a very efficient, slightly unnerving voice. A voice that gets things done.“
There was an entire year between this one and I kind of forgot how a lot of the details I had written before.