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Re: attack on my mind
Before even reading the poem, the summary had me think of an Inside Out fanfiction I read long ago, where instead of the OC’s main emotion being Joy, it was ...
Jul 18 -
Re: कोख और कब्र
Ah Mangled Soul, I kinda wish I would be able to read your poems in the original language but alas, hello google. Must agree with our favourite potato btw, that ...
Jul 17 -
Re: Fallen Angel
Well then, Rebel also said to interpret his poem how I want to and then was unhappy with my interpretation. Let’s see if I can do better here XD Tho ...
Jul 17 -
Re: The Forest
Hia and welcome! Hope you’re having a great day :3 And oh what a compelling story! I especially like how it all comes together at the end, all the different ...
Jul 17 -
Re: Mementos of a Life We Used to Live
Ohh what a compelling summary! I love this: I always woke up to the fruitful thuds of The floorboards and knew you were home. Also because fruitful is a double ...
Jul 17 -
Re: Prologue - Unnamed LMS VII Novel
Hia! I had this bookmarked in case it left the GR before I could get to it but I guess here I am now =D I really like the immediacy ...
Jul 17 -
Re: “You can’t save everybody, Jack”. (Intro-Chapter Three)
Hia creeper! I like the start of this story, gets me right in the head of LJ here! (especially the thing with the accordion xD) That said I find this ...
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Re: Touch
Why do I immediately have to think of the Mood Sceptre from Super Princess Peach when I read the summary? XD Aww “unwanted self” is a good phrase but also ...
Jul 17 -
Re: The Ultimate Gambler
Hia Rebel! Watch me not answer the PM and write reviews instead =D The summary gives me hope so for once I shall not feel like a cavewoman seeing fire ...
Jul 17 -
Re: Wildflower's Cry
Hia Catsz! I must admit, I don’t know either of these artists but I really, really like your first stanza! From the way mind, -hind and find flow together to ...
Jul 17 -
Re: Hallowed Ground | Chapter Two
Good morning Scarlett! Let’s read the second chapter of your story, after I’ve seen you work so hard on it :3 I love how you start with a bold formatting, ...
Jul 17 -
Re: Jessica’s origin | Part One: Childhood | Chapters 1, 2, + 3
And one more story today. Hmmm I’m trying to place Jessica but I can’t seem to remember her original story very well. But hey, this is her origin so I ...
Jul 16 -
Re: Five petrifying Richardson stories
But the decision was set. Gabriel was ignoring the pleas of Isabella and William Good afternoon creeper :3 Let’s delve back into Richardson shall we? Though idk if I can ...
Jul 16 -
Re: Jacob is dead--fpotp concept chapter
I was a bit hesitant abt the spoiler warning but I decided to take the plunge anyway. I think you start on a strong sentence. I like how this conveys ...
Jul 16 -
Re: remember when john green said if i show the world my belly it will devour me
I’m more familiar with Hank Green tbh John writes realistic, human stories, right? And he’s been on tumblr *trying to remember other trivia* But that quote is certainly something. and ...
Jul 16
