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Re: Sunlight Through Concrete Rain - Part 5 (still WIP)
Alright, I was promised a scene other than a drawn-out shootout, let’s do this. I am kinda worried we will have a death in this chapter… 32 I kinda wish ...
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Re: Raisa’s diary entry (9/24/1955)
Hia creeper, let’s see what Raisa is up to this time around, huh? =D I love how you nailed the tone of Raisa in this one. Like, her frustration is ...
Sep 10 -
Re: Visions Pt. 2
Yay and the next chapter begins with the cobalt blue flames. Let’s goo! Ohh are we in one such vision mentioned in the previous chapter now? Hmm you might want ...
Sep 10 -
Re: Visions
Well then friend, let’s see if you’re gonna be happy with my invasion XD Uhhh and since the poetry still intimidates me, let me start with GRAMMAR xd “star-woven” needs ...
Sep 10 -
Re: Chapter Three - Unnamed LMS VII Novel
Good morning leaf! Here before someone else steals the second review =D Hm shouldn’t it be the attendant “who” was serving him? I like how you included the prices (I ...
Sep 10 -
Re: [LMS] Loosely Lawful | 20
Okay, let’s go LL my beloved =D Hope LMS is kind to you, vento ^^ Raw fish didn’t agree with her, apparently. Kali greeted them Did she… did she try ...
Sep 9 -
Re: And so, it begins [part two: Jason’s POV]
Hia creeper, came back to read more abt Aeliana and Raisa :3 I like how you describe the doll. Well done :3 And I love how you connect these two ...
Sep 9 -
Re: Project Omelas Chapter Zero: Achilles Come Down.
Okay Moth :3 Hello again. Your writing style and I don’t mesh all too well I still want to show my support for someone who writes in such a unique ...
Sep 9 -
Re: Chapter 7
Hia Catz! Let me be the first to read the new chapter
Sep 9 -
Re: A love that slipped
Hia Alex, I know I’m supposed to answer Aiden and stuff. But I’m sad for no reason so time to read sad poetry :3 I have a feeling this one ...
Sep 8 -
Re: Fury in the Wind chp.1 - The Foreign Battalion
Thank you Leya for the Review Template! It is the only one I have ever used so let me rest in my comfort zone XD ❄️ Winter Whispers ❄️ The ...
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Re: Fury in the Wind Prologue - A Shadow in the Snow
Hello Messy, Here I am, as promised, reading Fury in the Wind =D I like how you introduce us to our protagonists here. That said, I think something went wrong ...
Sep 6 -
Re: Haven Academy
Ah, smart to put the question directly into the text XD (I feel like when I put them in a comment, ppl can easily miss them~) Hi hellow! I have ...
Sep 5 -
Re: ..
Good afternoon Junebug! I had this on my list for a while and now I’ve come to finally read it :3 I like how you start, with the italics. That ...
Sep 5 -
Re: “You can’t save everybody, Jack” (Chapter Four-Chapter Six)
Good morning creeper! I have come to read this next part of the story :3 Ohh that Chapter 4 feels like a somewhat sinister prelude to worse things to come… ...
Sep 5
