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Re: All roads lead to Larkspur
Good evening! Saw you posting another Poppy chapter and was like "ohh I read this recently so I need more!" Oha, and we have a time jump. Last time, they ...
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Re: A brand new best friend!
I lied. Another review to get me to a number ending on five. My favourite number~ It sounds like this is a standalone fic, not related to any of your ...
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Re: Charlotte finds peace
Ach, I have one more review for today in me, I think š First thought is actually that maybe you could have made it more clear who killed who here: ...
Jun 16 -
Re: The monster within | Chapter Nineteen | Nicole
Alright the summary for this one at least seems to promise some explanations. If the reaction of the parents are offā¦. Ah the magic runs deep! Letās read! Ohh āI ...
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Re: The monster within | Chapter Eighteen | Luke
Good morning! I have come for the two stories in this folder, so letās start with Ch18~ My first thought is actually: If the sun is so bright, why is ...
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Re: The marriage of Ruth and Marcus
Good morning! Only one new story in this folder so far, so letās head straight in! This feels very much like a continuation of that last snippet so Iām here ...
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Re: Clementine and Houston: Love in decaying hearts
And the other new story in the folder, letās go! I rly like the intro paragraph. Once again, stellar summary of who Clemetine is and what matters to her story ...
Jun 14 -
Re: Melanie Angelica-Love in decaying hearts
Good morning š I have come for this folder today! I remember that this is where the witches accidentally caused a crop failure and also (possibly related) the town went ...
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Re: Josefinaās birth
I like how you jump straight into the conversation here :3 I also appreciate the flashback and how it shows what Suzanne has been thinking in scenes weāve so far ...
Jun 13 -
Re: I wonder and I wait
Landed on the two stories in this folder to review today š Good morning! I remember Caspar. I find his story very tragic ā¹ I like the juxtaposition of mom ...
Jun 13 -
Re: Princess Magdalenaās origin-Sirenās Desire
I maintain that I like it when your origin stories begin with āthere once wasā etc and an explanation of who we are following this time :3 But! I also ...
Jun 12 -
Re: Euniceās story-Sirenās Desire
Catching up on some of the other folder stories I missed~ I like how you settle us into the story with the first paragraph. Feels like I got a bunch ...
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Re: Charlesā story-Zombies of Mariesville
I kinda like it when you start these snippets with a summary of who we are engaging with š That said I find this one really really really short and ...
Jun 12 -
Re: Josetteās story-Zombies of Mariesville
Hmmm I remember I wasnāt that happy with how Bradenās side of events went but maybe Josette can win me over. I like the first paragraph and that it at ...
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Re: Emberlynn, Juniper, and Dakota pass on
Came here in search of answers. Ok at least Brooklyn gets mentioned again. So we have another big jump forward. Also⦠I wish we got an explanation here on why ...
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