Tikaya

Hm you said a few chapters ago that non-telepaths don’t rly have a “sense” of their mental plane. So… how does Ash rly process this question? “Wonderful! What areas feel ...

Oh my… I know Shadow is worried abt the fact that Ash might spill his secrets…. But she does feel like someone who could use a mental presence to lean ...

I wonder if the champion is Jarid XD Just a thought. We know that Jarid’s group wanted to win their own tournament so desperately for their chance to come here. ...

Ok that is an ominous title. Oh… Maybe Jarid is too late and he can no longer save Shadow from Bellum. Ahhh Jarid, the one thing you could have done ...

Hmmm it sounds like part of why Ash is so disillusioned and broken is bc she lost faith in her own organization. Probably by good reason, given what we saw ...

Ohhhh we are diving into Ash now. I am so ready for that! “ creating a mental barrier with the assistance of Bellum’s power.” I am convinced he doesn’t actually ...

And we continue right where I left off! I do like that Bellum starts with v easy tasks where Shadow cannot easily find fault in them. And that Shadow so ...

Well, I was always kinda hoping you would start reviewing novels—something closer to what you also write (review what you write and all xd) but well, the time has come ...

Good morning! Let’s look at your very long chapters that you posted recently =D Starting with this one! Alright, Samantha , the first child. And I like that while you ...

Soo, fight scenes are kinda my bread and butter so I am looking forward to yours :3 “ The door cracked and splintered, but not until it gave way” Okay, ...

Five is my favourite number so I’m hyped for this :3 I do like the first sentence! But I feel like if you go for such a beginning, it calls ...

Heya~ I like how you start with setting the scene! I feel like you rely too much on adjectives/adverbs but otherwise, great start! What others do you mean here? “where ...

Morning! Oh my… the story from Thorn’s perspective. We all know why she digs that hole but I am curious if he knew too… “ and she was happy to ...

Since I’m posting long chapters, I like to check out what other people put into theirs =D And also I am curious what another person who read Nine likes to ...

Good morning and a warm welcome :3 Let’s take a look at your work, shall we? It might be helpful if you put a bit more info abt your work ...