Tikaya

A really short chapter overall. I like that Alanna does want to help Caden but she never once even questions how taking revenge is going to do that. Will it ...

I really like that the story is focused on the parents. That's not that common and this is the second one I read from you that does so! That said, ...

I like that sentiment: I only pretend to be shy so that people don’t ask too many damn questions! Hmm I don't know how to feel about Janice. She feels ...

First of all: love the name Deinne :) I know I have not read the first chapter but I hope you can bear with me anyway! I really like your ...

Right of the bat that strikes me as a cool observation: because they are not being limited by set rules of how they are supposed to behave Reminds me a ...

Oh I like how ominous that last sentence sounds. This feels more like the blurb of a book than an actual story though. I don’t know what to feel about ...

Oh jee, oh jee. It sounds like Kyle's parents are not exactly supportive. I'm kinda unclear on how and where Kyle has the opportunity to speak with Ben or how ...

Hia! I really like the setting of the chapter. Night at a museum? Sign me in! I also really like the snake companion :3 I can just imagine the adorable ...

I like that the parents' wishes actually come true, in this main story bc they did want her to make new friends and Jasmine is actually super excited to meet ...

Hm I'm not really feeling that story. I mean it's sad that the daughter disappeared and it's probably realistic in that... well, sometimes things just happen like that. But for ...

I like the empathy that Poppy displays with this: Poppy waited patiently, for she was once the unsure one. That is a really nice character note and also ties back ...

Ohhh that is an imagine and more: And Circe broke that trust. She broke everyone. She tore them all apart and sucked on their bones. That is very creepy and ...

Hi hello! Haven't read the other parts but here I am anyway xd The first thing that strikes me is that you should work on your punctuation. There needs to ...

Looks like I found another Laughing Jack story :) I like Sally's personality and that she's probaly the furthest from what that boy expected xd I am very confused about ...

Hi, hello! I know I haven't read the other parts but I still wanted to share my thoughts on your writing, no matter how disconnected to the rest of the ...