Tikaya

Hach, I really like the first sentence. It tells me so much that I need to know about this story and I am so here for it! That said, I ...

I want to start with saying how pleasant the beginning of your chapter is. I like the flow of the sentences, even though I haven’t read any of the other ...

Hi hello! Wanted to drop by with a review and my very first advise is: make paragraphs. A long text like this is very hard to read :) Is the ...

So I read this and was concentrating on rhythm and stuff, without really understanding the meaning but then this comes: To leave, one must pay in grain, and suddenly everything ...

My first question is actually why the lyrical narrator expects to be dug from her grave. I like the image of the heart now being blacker than the soil. I ...

I feel very in the moment with your introductory descriptions this chapter 😊 Hm I also feel like this sentence is lacking in some way: so she could see everything ...

A very heavy subject matter, so I did read with care. My first thought, as always, is about the writing style and I feel like it could use a bit ...

Love the introductory line. Gets one right into the story! I like what it says about Jason that he's willing to spend 5 hours on a girl who didn't pay ...

First of all, I really appreciate the synopsis at the beginning. I also like this part: to Ruelle they were an alluring portal into an ancient kingdom of grand legends ...

So, first of some random thoughts I had while reading: I like the interspersed short questions like "Hey what's wrong" or "what's this?" Aren’t you supposed to be getting better? ...

Love the beginning you chose for Tale 12. Sets the mood and the descriptions are really immserive! I like how Miranda's own obsession with her phone or rather the digital ...

Hi hello, here for a quick review! First up: Really interesting way to order the words, I love how it works to cement the message of the poem. [Must admit, ...

Okay after doing a few reviews for other people's work, I'm back on familiar ground. Hi creeper :) I just want to say that I've read so much of yours ...

Oh I immediately felt intrigued by the line: "Advance ahead from a pupa" because I didn't really expect it nor have I really thought about using a pupa stage as ...

Okay, putting on my still very-unfamiliar poetry hat. I like how you use the dove in the first paragraph to hammer home that the battle has been senseless. I also ...