Tikaya

Ahhh immediately ominious since here's the Dante we've heard from in the last chapter @.@ It's strange to reconicile what we head of Dante last chapter with a line like ...

Oh Mireya casually dropping that she's at least centuries old. I love that :) Although the pronoun issue persists. It feels either like you decided half-way through that you changed ...

Ahhh the story is called the last spell and now the mystery person mentions a First Spell??? I believe there is a lot to this story and yet here i ...

Not sure if that was the intention but I just chuckled at the line "so that I could start murdering like them." Just the imagine of "yeah yeah, enough learning ...

In fact, I liked it so much that I immediately went to the other part of the chapter in the Green Room. Let's see what Katja has to say. I ...

Now I have not read any of the other chapters so I come in here blind and ready to just focus on the writing. I learnt that it's quite fun ...

First of all, I find it very nice to have a being that looks monstreous to be seen as a person. Even if he's too afraid of the other girls' ...

I'm the first to admit that poems are not my strong forte. But I was very captivated by yours. It feels very gruesome and detailed, describing a harrowing medical procedure ...

Oh it's a huge coincidence that Trish invents a man that happens to be related to her late husbands crimes! I wish this story weren't just dialogue. The supper arrived ...

A really short chapter overall. I like that Alanna does want to help Caden but she never once even questions how taking revenge is going to do that. Will it ...

I really like that the story is focused on the parents. That's not that common and this is the second one I read from you that does so! That said, ...

I like that sentiment: I only pretend to be shy so that people don’t ask too many damn questions! Hmm I don't know how to feel about Janice. She feels ...

First of all: love the name Deinne :) I know I have not read the first chapter but I hope you can bear with me anyway! I really like your ...

Right of the bat that strikes me as a cool observation: because they are not being limited by set rules of how they are supposed to behave Reminds me a ...

Oh I like how ominous that last sentence sounds. This feels more like the blurb of a book than an actual story though. I don’t know what to feel about ...