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Hey Why did you put a rating on it lol? Its not like 14 year olds still believe that a stork brought them to their frontstep I'd probally undersatnd this ...

" shes one of those girls they're nothing but trouble just one look and now your seein double before you know it she'll be gon off to the next one" ...

Hey I love this poem, i can realate to the part when you said Had a father who was too suffocating; like a boa constrictor; [This is awkward.] "I always ...

Hey Oh my. This poem is amazing, a 10/10, a 100%. It was scary, and it freaked me out so much but i loved it, you have talent and i ...

Hey Wow i loved it. You really got the message to me, it is indeed a powerful peice of writing. To me it explains how people think they knoe someone ...

Hey Welcome to YWS. I really hate to tell you this but you are not acting like a real writer. You say you've been writing since you were born, and ...

LOVED IT maybe its because i can relate to it like 100%, and it was really nice to see someone else write about something like this. I wrote i poem ...

Okay sorry to say this but you come off like a needy girlfriend in this poem. Umm it seems like this is a to do list for guys you date, ...

I undersatnd that this is your feelings, and you have shown them really well in this poem. You chose a good topic to write about because many can relate to ...

I LOVED this so much. This has to be the best poem i've ever read on YWS, if i didn`t already agree with you when i started reading the poem, ...

I really like this piece of writing. Mainly because the animals are exactly how my pets are. I have a cat and a dog and they do the exact same ...

I really like what you've written, but it really should be more personal if its a diary, you should say more stuff thats on her mind. Also try and make ...

Hey Cole! i need points, aha. So i didn`t know you were gonn post anything like this , i didn`t even know you wrote anything like this. I guess it ...

I agree the Karma at the end is wonderful, did you write this by yourself? i like how the chapter name is at the end, but your character is to ...

Ok first of all this is in the wrong section. If you dont know the different styles of writing you should learn them k. well it is sad, but if ...