Threnody

To Begin With: Pretty epic... I liked this, it was a very typical Fantasy read, and not something new or original or anything, but overall, you managed pretty well. Let ...

Hey, nice song, it's really sweet and unlike some songs, you can actually imagine it being a real song... if you know what I mean. Here's a few comments. Listen ...

Hey Dream-Catcher!! Nice poem, very Robert Frost-ish, if you know what I'm talking about. I enjoyed the read, you have a nice flowing vocabulary and a pretty smooth style. I'm ...

Hey Acta, love the idea, here's just some little comments~ Sunday There was a play About the trillionth time Romeo and Juliet fell in love • Let me get this ...

I search everywhere I look But I cannot find • You cannot find what? I understand how vagueness can play a part in poetry very well, but in this case, ...

Interesting poem, here's a few comments. Do you know how much it hurts? You talk about her, You've told me that you flirt. Don't you see the pain it stirs? ...

Hi Maya!1 I thought this poem was so sweet. On Wednesday afternoon At almost five to four God did something awful That should be against the law • Your rhyme ...

Aw, this is a really depressing poem. Here's some of my editing suggestions, and then I'll tell you what I think. Quite words of ash stain the wind, Where hollow ...

Hey Timochy. Depressing poem you got here... feel better. :) Here's your review~ I've made her thumble Just one thing, what's this word supposed to be? I shall find a ...

Hello! Yes, a lot of people enjoy writing poems based around this, and sadly follow all sorts of stereotypes. But fortunately, you've remained generally open minded. Here's your review~ And ...

Hi, I'm Forever Threnody. Yep. I see you're new. I won't bore you with the entire welcoming ritual. You can go to the welcoming forum for that. But anyhow, I'm ...

Hi Bass! My brother plays bass. I hear it's pretty addicting once you can actually play it... but no matter. To the writing at hand: you got me incense, and ...

Hi GreatEscape! I haven't met you yet, so hi. I'm Forever Threnody. Okay, so onto your review. I want to be someone else, because I'm done with me. Somewhere I ...

Hi Wiseman, here's your review~ Listen to the wind chimes chime, Touch the dreams adoringly adored. • What is the deal with these? I mean they're sort of cute, but ...

Hi, it's Forever. I like this beginning! You've got a very broad vocabulary. Here's the review: The clothes he wore were, naturally, ragged and putrid with the remains of the ...