Threnody

Hello Spinelli! I was immediately drawn to this because I thought it looked interesting and I was correct in that assumption. McDonalds has been frequently associated with the dissatisfaction many ...

Hello Lawson, I haven't had the chance to read any of your work and so I think it's definitely about time. My first impression was that this poem was extremely ...

Hello! Good to hear from you again! I am excited to read some new writing of yours. I was interested in reading more of it and so it was a ...

Hello! I was drawn in by your title and I am actually quite interested in what I have read. You seem to have a very solid idea of what you ...

Oh gosh, it's the last section. I wish there were more! Seriously though, regardless of the fact that your writing is nearly impeccable, this section was sort of a let ...

Hello! Sorry it took so long for me to get a chance to read this. I think it's great and your style never ceases to intrigue. A huge ebon-skinned trader ...

Hello! Here is the review as you requested. I really liked this and I thought it was intriguing and meaningful without being too blunt. I thought it was strange how ...

Hello Sky! I thought this chapter was quite beautiful. Your word choice was impeccable and your pacing seemed urgent, but rightfully so. There's just a few things I noticed. I ...

Hello! I really like this story! The twist at the end was pretty interesting and it was quite a surprise. Your use of dialogue in pacing the story was very ...

Hello! I have to say, I really loved this piece. There was something about it's innocence and pure storytelling that I felt was extremely appealing. Your pacing was right on ...

Hello! I think this is actually a really entertaining story. It's lightheartedness was very fresh and it's humor was pretty amusing. I just have a few comments. 1. Grammar, Punctuation ...

Hello! I don't think we've come across each other on this site, but welcome to YWS! I think this poem is rather interesting, as it transcends both the format of ...

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Hey lady, thought I'd take you up on your offer for a character sketch! For one, I thought this was a really good piece and I have next to nothing ...

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Hey lady, thought I'd take you up on your offer for a character sketch! For one, I thought this was a really good piece and I have next to nothing ...

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Hey lady, thought I'd take you up on your offer for a character sketch! For one, I thought this was a really good piece and I have next to nothing ...