Thisislegacy

Legacy here for a review. Structure first. I notice that you have a ton of run on sentences (I don't know if this was intentional or not?) but it can ...

Legacy here for a review y'all. I love all the imagery with the solar entities. I also love how its showing all the beauty of outer space and comparing it ...

Legacy here because I hoard points lol. In your title it says this is supposed to be rhyming verse but it's very difficult for me to find the rhyme pattern. ...

Legacy here for a review (let's get this out of the greenroom, its been here plenty of time). First off, I don't know if it's because of the website or ...

Legacy here for a review. I am not familiar with the other drafts you have, but I don't think that matters too much right (we'll see)? I don't know if ...

Legacy here for a review. I love the content of this poem but it was very difficult to read because the white text is directly over the white bits of ...

Legacy here for a review. I love how this poem is formatted; it really displays how you want this to be read (from the beginning being read more slowly and ...

Legacy here ~ The line breaks are awkward since you cut off your thoughts into separate stanzas. A common idea when it comes to stanzas is they are a lot ...

Legacy here for a review. I'm not going to nitpick too much about the small areas that you could improve with word choice (some places you have words that are ...

Legacy here, I won't dwell too much about the formatting since it was already mentioned in another review but it was very difficult for me to read the block of ...

Legacy here for a review (and coming out of hiding). I personally love rainy days when I don't have to out in them, but I love the idea of telling ...

Legacy here for a review. I love the content here, I just have a few nitpicks that could be changed (but don't necessarily have to). It would be easier to ...

Legacy here for a review. I love the concept that you have here, but the way you display this could be changed. It would be easier to read if you ...

Legacy here for a review. I love the content and the story you are telling. The way it is written though makes everything feel rushed. It would feel better paced ...

Legacy here for a review. You have a very simple rhyme pattern, but it does look like you have broken it in the 3rd stanza where fight, girl, and wrists ...