ThirdBetrayle

I wish He would read this. You revealed my thoughts better than I could >...< Stupid heartache, leave me alone -.- Great poem; you have no idea how much I ...

Hey! I just thought I should stop by and leave you a helpful review. Gruesome beginning; just down right repulsive. In a good way of course! I did read the ...

Hey! Just thought I should stop by and leave a helpful review. Talk. About. INTENSE! Great Jesus of Virgin Mary's womb; whoa! That whole part with Jake charming Alexia had ...

Hey! I just thought I should stop by and leave a helpful review! Reading about Cecilia's legs was pretty weird, haha, but once I read this whole part, I couldn't ...

Hey! I just thought I'd stop by and leave a helpful review. I liked how you opened this chapter at the heat of the moment. Anger, regret, accusations...those stinging emotions ...

Hey! I just thought I should stop by and leave you a helpful review. So, this chapter was actually pretty confusing as compared to the others. Not the plot itself, ...

Hey! I just read your chapter and I thought I should leave a review that would be helpful to you. I think the opening paragraphs are very interesting. This is ...

Hey! I had fun reading this chapter and so I'm writing a review that'll hopeful help you. I think this was pretty funny and engaging at the same time, which ...

Oh my o; Breathtaking poem! I can't believe you fit that much description into so short lines. I wonder where this home is located... The opening lines were quite troublesome ...

Oh my goodness, this is such a sad and touching poem. I can relate so much to it because so many people have died in the past year that I ...

This is pretty interesting o; I liked how you began your poem with two bland words. "A forest." Already giving us an insight of what is next to come but ...

The beginning of the poem was...strange, haha. Strange in the sense that I didn't really know what to expect or better yet what was going on. But as I continued ...

Oh! What a magnificent poem!!! Your opening was very strong! "Once eternal, always eternal. Once a spark, always a spark. Live, jump, dance." I loved the constant repetition of words ...

Hey! This chapter is actually pretty well done. It's short, yes, but it's just a small part of the whole plot, the beginning of things to say the least and ...

Hey! Great plot line you have going here, the ending of this chapter really revealed what you're gearing this story towards and I think it's fascinating. Your use of the ...