Theodorable

Hello! Teddybear here for a review. I like the fact that you wrote a poem about the simple task of eating cereal. Most people are half asleep when they do ...

Hello! Teddybear here for a review. I will start by saying that the word play was quite clever. I enjoyed it very much. Now for the meat of it! Good ...

Hello! Teddybear here with a review! I want to start by saying that I liked this. It is simple and sweet. As for the nitty-gritty parts- The only punctuation error ...

Heya Lefty! I figured I continue reviewing the rest of your chapters. :) First, I really liked this bit. It didn't have a lot of information dumping and it was ...

Hello! Teddy here for a review. This poem is kind of dark. (Reminds me of the poetry I used to write when I was younger.) I kind of relate to ...

Hey Captain! Teddy here for a review. This was very short and simple, but I really enjoyed it. It's a typical day during the summer for most people. The one ...

Hello! Teddy here for a review. First of all- wow. I loved this. Made me think about how people fight to stay alive, when in the simplest of terms all ...

Hello! Sorry it's taken me so long to review this, but here I am! First, I want to say that this is very good. I can see how everyone is ...

Hello, Teddy here with a review! First, let me say that this good. I just can't seem to tell if it's an internal battle, or if there is another person. ...

Hello, Teddy here for a review. I have to say that this poem evoked a couple different emotions from me. At first it was disbelief. The fact that you kind ...

Hello! I will be reviewing your poem today. :) First off this is kind of a sad piece to me. The narrator goes from remembering the old days to the ...

Here as requested. Let's jump into this shall we? First off I enjoyed reading this. It has a good start and the pacing is good. For the intro, I thought ...

Here as requested! First things first. This is a really sweet poem. The stanzas are consistent and the emotion is easy to pick up on. Now onto the critiques: You ...

Hi! Let me just say that I LOVED this! I own a cat and everything that I go through with my Kairi is here. I like how you stayed consistent ...

Hello! I enjoyed this very much. The simplicity in your writing style reminds me of my poetry. Anyway, the only comments I have are that the last stanza should keep ...