TheSilentBagpipe

Thank you so much Ryu! I cannot believe you just compared me to the greatest writer of all time (my inspiration, the man who got me into writing), I am ...

Thank you so much Lav for your review! I needed it and appreciate it immensely! I will work on my mistakes =) This chapter is officially of book two, so ...

Thank you so much for review, it helped me quite a bit and for that I am very thankful. To tell you the truth I am not sure if I ...

Thank you so much for your review! I will try to change the stuf when I can =)

Thank you so much Eros, sorry to say I quit this book...I have a couple other chapters written though

Thank you so much Kat, I appreciate the advice and the praise. I will try review some of your work when I get time =)

Yeah I should =) Thank you soo much for the review!!

Thank you Bball41! This is my sisters favorite piece of mine =) I got the idea from a friend of mine who is thinking of joining the military. Then this ...

Thank you so much ishitadutt! You are a great writer also, your work is really well written =) I cannot belive you caught those typos...! I never would have seen ...

Thank you ishiadutt if I have a problem I'll come to you =) Your welcome for the review ;)

Hahahaha Thank you so much for your review! It made me smile, then crack up ;) I will switch that out when I get time, thank you for the suggestion. ...

Thank you so much for the review Bball41! I am really really happy that I am getting some reviews, thank you!

Its okay xD

Its okay xD

Thank you so much for your review Myjaspercat! I am happy to get harsh ones, lets me know what I need to work on =) Thank you again!