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Re: Last.
Hello there alexblackwell! The Silent Bagpipe here to review some of your work! Okay so I'm going to give you a little bit of my personal opinion on your piece: ...
Jan 11, 2017 -
Re: A Father's Dream
Hello there rohan, The Silent Bagpipe here to review some of your work! Okay so first a quick personal opinion on the poem before I go into the grammar and ...
Dec 7, 2016 -
Re: Who Was Bernie Sanders?- Chapter 1
Hello there Mr.MuddyPig, TheSilentBagpipe here to review some of your work! First off I must say that I had no clue who this guy was before your biography. I'm not ...
Dec 7, 2016 -
Re: Mirror
Hey there Aleta! The Silent Bagpipe here to review some of your work. I'll give you my personal opinion before I get on to the details of your poem. I ...
Dec 7, 2016 -
Re: Inferno
Hello there GalaxyUnicornz, TheSilentBagpipe here for a review of your work. Okay so I'll just start from the beginning of you poem and work my way from there. Stanza #1 ...
Dec 7, 2016 -
Re: Lover's Remorse
Hello there ongoeslife! The Silent Bagpipe here for a review of your work. Before we go onto grammar and those details I will give you my own personal opinion of ...
Nov 29, 2016 -
Re: Untitled Poem (Be Yourself/Express Yourself)
Hello there JaylinBoykins! The Silent Bagpipe has come to review some of your work! First off, before we get into the technicalities of grammar ect., let me give you my ...
Nov 29, 2016 -
Re: wings of glass
Hello there ScarlettFire! SilentBagpipe here to review some of your work... First I must say that your poem attracted me because I am a big fan of dragons. I love ...
Nov 28, 2016 -
Re: Handwriting
Hey there ChocolateCello! The Silent Bagpipe here to review your work! First off - This poem was awesome. It was cute and short but enough to give you a full ...
Sep 2, 2015 -
Re: Yws Is Dying
Hey there Atsmai! The Silent Bagpipe here of review some of your work. Well to tell you the truth I just wanted to check it out considering the tittle... My ...
Aug 11, 2015 -
Re: Terrible Beauty
Hello there QueenAnne! The Silent Bagpipe here to review some of you work. Ok first off let me just say that I liked this poem. It was strange and cool, ...
Aug 5, 2015 -
Re: I Am a Writer
Hey there The Unknown Writer! The Silent Bagpipe here to do a review of your work! Ok so first off let me just say that this poem was really quite ...
Aug 3, 2015 -
Re: Youth's explanation for over speeding!
Hello there Muskan! The Silent Bagpipe here to review some of your work... First off let me just say that I liked this poem, even though they weren't my reasons ...
Aug 3, 2015 -
Re: Phoenix Inferno 1.1 (revised)
Hello there PickledChrissy! I have finally come to review your work! I tried to get to it as fast as I could =) First off lets start with the mistakes ...
Aug 3, 2015 -
Re: A Demigod Song
Hey there Claire72! The Silent Bagpipe here to review your amazing, hilarious fandom work! First off I'm just going to say that I am a major fan of the Percy ...
Aug 1, 2015
