TheShauzer

Okay, well thanks for the feedback :) I'll look back over it.

Thanks Nokri :)

Thanks for the review Catcha :) I know the rhyming scheme was inconsistent, noticed it at the end but kinda liked it :')

No need to be sorry, great writing for a non-poet, well done.

:D don't take mediocre too seriously, just thought it sounded professional ;) I'll try to read more!!!

:) I'm subconsciously psychic, what can I say? Well, it was a nice idea and very well executed. Kudos.

Completely agree on the website's formatting, for a website dedicated wholly to writing, it sucks. But well done anyway, good poem! :)

I like the idea, it will probably forever be confusing in my head but well done :D Oh, don't leave it to my imagination that's just cruel!

:) no problem

Glad :) was waiting for a string of complaints :D If you're really only ten this was a great piece, you should be very proud.

Thanks Iggy :)

Thank you :D

:D

No bother :)

Will do :)