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  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: What We Carve On Time (By Lavender)

    Thanks for the review, ColdOne! Also yes, it's definitely a reference to House of Memories.

    Apr 17
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Ever-Changing Stasis (By Lavender)

    Thanks for the review, Tikaya! :p Forced rhyming structure is kind of a theme in Lavender's poems while Jasmine prefers vers libre. Also, lol, I guess yeah, the answer is ...

    Apr 14
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Trust Is All We Need (By Jasmine)

    Thanks for the comments, this poem's actually a part of an anthology that I am writing in this National Poetry Writing Month.

    Apr 11
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: The Lady Who Carries A Torch (By Jasmine)

    Thanks for the review, Nataleeen! I am glad that you loved the poem! :p

    Apr 11
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: The Lady Who Carries A Torch (By Jasmine)

    Thanks for the review, Darlet! I am glad that you loved it! :p

    Apr 11
  • Poetry » Satire, Romantic Re: I love slurping Tea... and You (By Jasmine)

    Thanks for the review, Nataleeen!

    Apr 10
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: Hard to Make, Easy to Break (By Lavender)

    Thanks for the review, Nataleeen! Great suggestions, what do you think the answer to the riddle is?

    Apr 10
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Brightest Star (By Lavender)

    Thanks for the review, foxgirl! Well, this is the 7th poem (or, the first one of the 4th pair of poems) for the anthology of poems I am writing ("Of ...

    Apr 8
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Brightest Star (By Lavender)

    Thanks for the review, Nataleeen! I am glad that the ideas and imagery come across well! What do you think is the one-word answer that Lavender is seeking?

    Apr 8
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Dear Professor Caesar

    YOU ACTUALLY CHECKED IT, I AM SO HAPPY!! (AND SO SORRY ;-;) Yeah, so, I was new to prose when I wrote this so I didn't exactly understand the concept ...

    Apr 8
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: A Peasant's Plea

    Thanks for the... comment, Tika! This is referring to Napoleon's stupid 1812 Russian campaign, yes, where Tsar Alexander I used the scorched earth tactic to screw over Napoleon's plans to ...

    Apr 7
  • Poetry » Humor, Horror Re: A terrible poem

    This poem is truly GOATed

    Apr 6
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Ever-Changing Stasis (By Lavender)

    Thanks for the review, aquarious! I am glad that you like the rhyming structure, it's a prominent feature of Lavender's poetry -- the persona writing this poem -- and it's ...

    Apr 6
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Final Kiss (By Jasmine)

    Hey there, Tika! Thanks for the review as always! :p About 'in', yeah, that was a brain fart -- thanks for rectifying it! Yeah, so, I am planning to make ...

    Apr 6
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Breath of the Wild (By Lavender)

    Hey! So this is more of a series of poems that I have recently started for the National Poetry Writing Month where two locers, Lavender and Jasmine, exchange poems to ...

    Apr 5


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