ThePhoenix

Wow! So much action in this one chapter. And you describe it really well. I think you put so much description that I started imagining this happening in slow motion. ...

Well, this is interesting. I've always thought of the sixth sense as that feeling you get when you're being watched (ok, that's an actual thing but whatever). I guess this ...

Totally not practicing poetry reviews on your poems. :D Now, for your poem. I guess it basically describes kids. All the things they're afraid of (although I think they kinda ...

Hello there! This was a fantastic poem. A little dark with the ending. And I may not be the best at reviewing poems but I'm here so... :D So, the ...

I thought that I should really improve on reviewing poetry so... here I am! Back again. Also, don't mess with the fandoms. They will destroy you... (Insert evil laugh here). ...

Hello Me! No, wait, I can't call you that. Um. Hello And! Eh, no. Um. Hello Books! Eh, good enough. I'll come up with another nickname later. Actually, I'll just ...

Well, I said I'd give it a shot, and here I am. Prepare to cringe at this horrible review. And this is going to be quite short as... well, reasons. ...

Hello there! I'm afraid I may not be as helpful as RagingLive, but I'll try (please don't kill me). To start off, no, I don't think you're revealing too much. ...

HELLO THERE! I still need a transition to the actual review... Sorry if this is a little like Myth's review... D: Stuff Maids So um, why is the words "Maids" ...

Yes, yes. I know. I'm a jerk for reviewing this so late and I don't blame you if you hate me now but the important thing is, I'm reviewing this ...

HELLO THERE! I'm here to review your work. I'm not the ideal person for this job but hey! It's someone, right? Let me just first say that I had to ...

HELLO! I am here to review, I may not be the ideal person for the job but... yeah. Hahaha! I love how you put YWS into this story. I had ...

This was a great essay! I'll admit, I'm the kind of person that mainly looks at numbers instead of life... Anyway... REVIEW! There are a few grammatical errors, but that's ...

Slap me. I'm serious, somebody slap me. I totally forgot to review this. I know you tagged me like, three days ago but... well, school. So, without further ado. REVIEW! ...

SQUEAL— No wait, guys don't do that... Uh... What do guys do? Eh, whatever. Let me just say that I absolutely loved this. I always love stories like this. Where ...