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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Song

    i really liked this! It's very beautiful, steady, and inspiring! THis is comeing from me, who usually ignores poetry. I like it and all, I just don't 'get it'. Well, ...

    Feb 23, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I Was There

    I'm sorry it took so long for me to reveiw. But I'm glad to inform you that I loved your story! First, the bad stuff: He noted her longing look ...

    Feb 23, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Into Thin Air - Chapter Two (in progress!)

    Oh, this is amazing! Sorry I have been procrastinating in my reviews, I regret it now that I have read this! How marvelous your work is! This chapter is really ...

    Feb 13, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chapter one

    Just a few nit-picks: As we walked down the hall, [color=#BF0000]It was that day when i noticed him[/color], actually noticed him. I needs to be capitolized, but 'It' doesn't. And ...

    Feb 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Forbidden Love

    Congratulations! The Lord has blessed you with a successful post! ( I liked your prayer at the begining too) I really really really LOOOOVED this!! Emensly! It's amazing. Short, sweet, ...

    Feb 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: W.R.I.T.E.R.S Ch. 1

    Hey! I'm back to reveiw agian! Ok, I think this is good for a story build up, a good introduction. But not as epic as the prologe. But that's ok. ...

    Feb 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: W.R.I.T.E.R.S (Prologue)

    Oh my goodness I really really love this! It feels so like a James Patterson novel. I want to read more so bad! I'm bound to get addicted! I love ...

    Feb 1, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Golden Waters (a Civil War short story)

    Here I am as you have requested to review! I liked your story. The Civil War is a great topic, you seem good at it. ( my topic is Early ...

    Jan 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Voice In My Head

    I really really really LOVE this one! How amazing! It speaks a message people of the world need to hear. It's amazing! As a Christian myself, I really like it! ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: When I was young

    I like your poem! Its short and sweet and cute too. I also strongly agree with it. I miss my childhood! But I do recommend some spaceing. I mean like ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A reason, A season

    I really like this! I can relate too, for I also beleve there is a reason for everything. And I also like the biblical-ness of the poem, for I am ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Lily Foxglove Chp 1 Part 1

    I really liked this. I am dying to read more, and I think I will :) I like how the character is daring and adventurous, and trying to solve a ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Puppy

    I really like this, it is sweet and touching. I like how with each stanza, it is a different time period. I also like how alot of dog lovers can ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Three women and a blank page

    I really really like this! I like the dramatic irony you used at the end of each stanza. And I like how it's short and sweet, I'll admit that if ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Child's Fear - Chapter 1

    I really liked this story you have made. It was mysterious, no doubt, and also very foreshadowing. I like the two different monsters, both with different text, and the fact ...

    Jan 30, 2011


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