TheOffBroadwayAuthor

Great job with those details! I was more invested in Cortez's story this time around. I think the interview will be a great opportunity to see how Cortez presents himself ...

Good job! I think this applies to a lot of things. It reminds me of how one of my friends became a completely different person in just a couple weeks, ...

Dude, this is so good. I re-read it four or five times. I think most everyone thinks "If I tried harder, I could have been something" multiple times in their ...

I haven't read/watched the piece of media you're writing about, but I still enjoyed this poem! Quatrains are a real challenge, especially when you add rhythm and rhyme, and you ...

My main thought on the novel thus far is that you skipped over a lot of details. For instance, what was Cortez and Shayene's marriage like at the beginning? How ...

The title's a bit of a bait-and-switch, but that's whatever. I do, however, like that you just told a story. "Show, don't tell" doesn't apply to everything. You show emotions ...

I think you have a lot of good ideas in this poem, but I would try to re-write it as a free verse poem rather than trying to stick your ...

Your poem is well-written, and it does make me think. Crying costs us nothing, and the relief it brings is so temporary compared to the embarrassment of crying in front ...

This is so random and I love it. I'm still not sure what happened in between, but my guess is that Myr accidentally turned the world upside down and earned ...

This is a really great story! I like that Inari only discovered her curiosity after the encounter with the ghost. Her desire for peace in her life became a desire ...

You had me on the edge of my seat. Reminds me of "To Build a Fire", but I was much more invested in this protagonist. Despite knowing nothing about them, ...