TheDarkWriter

Simple and beautiful, I have nothing negative to say about this. Good Job :)

Yes unfortunately it was, but not the mental institution bit. I have clinical depression and major anxiety so it's been a hard life for me but thanks for your review ...

Oh wow now I'm interested to know more about you, I just read your profile and about the things you have been through, I can sure relate to all of ...

Thankyou GhostHunter, just thankyou :)

Thanks childofApollo777 :) I just thought it was about time, I told people how I felt, so I'm glad that you can relate to this.

thanks GhostHunter, it means alot :)

Thanks :)

Their are supposed to be line breaks in the poem but when I published it, it didn't work, sorry!

Hey and yeah I was making it a sad ending. and thanks for your feedback!

Thanks mate :)

thanks, but this is a narrative poem so it doesn't have to rhyme but thanks for your feedback :)

Really like this for some reason! When I read the first two lines and just wanted to read more. As I read it, it sounded a bit creepy but in ...

Thanks Felistia :)

I forgot to put some commas in, so please try to ignore it thanks! :)