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Re: Soul's Decay : Chapter Seventeen
Hello, luv! Aurora here with a quick review for you. I've only read chapter sixteen, so you'll excuse me if something I say was previously mentioned/taken care of. Okay, Nitpicks ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: Better Things: Chapter 26: Ben Again
Hello, love! Aurora here with a quick review for you! I haven't read the previous chapters, so excuse me if I completely mess up and tell you to do something ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: Soul's Decay : Chapter Sixteen
Hello, luv! Aurora here for a quick review. Haven't read the previous chapters, so I hope I don't point out anything you've already addressed. Nitpicks and the like first, eh? ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: A Poem of a Conversation
Hello, love! Aurora here with a quick review for you. I must say, this was quite funny to read. I mean, I've had the happen to me before, but never ...
Jul 6, 2014 -
Re: House of Night: Chapter 2: Third Person
Hello, love! Aurora here with a quick review for you! Alright, well, I found no nitpicks in this chapter. Incidentally, I did go back and read chapter one, so I ...
Jul 6, 2014 -
Re: A Tribute (And A Lamenting)
Hello, love! Aurora here with a quick review for you! Alright. I didn't find any spelling errors, so let's move on, shall we? the lingering remnants of the past brought ...
Jul 6, 2014 -
Re: High On A Death
Hello, love! Aurora here with a quick review for you! May I say that I absolutely love the formatting you have here? Wonderful! Mind, heart, and soul, eh? I'd just ...
Jul 4, 2014 -
Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: the Osorezu and the Hana (9-1)
Hello, love! Aurora here with a quick review for you! Nitpicks first, yeah? After all, this was a cause for celebration as Kai was to be he first chosen for ...
Jul 4, 2014 -
Re: Snow: The Tale of A Cold Heart (Part IX)
Hello, love! Aurora here with a quick review for you! Nitpicks first: It almost seemed like a white, lace curtain was hanging from her window. No comma needed between white ...
Jul 4, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 63-64 (Revised)
Hello, love! Aurora here with a quick review for you! I found no nitpicks whatsoever in this chapter. The speeches were passionate. And they didn't work. That was so funny, ...
Jul 4, 2014 -
Re: The Dead Sea (in two parts)
Hello, love! Aurora here with a quick review for you! I think, firstly, that you can get rid of the little roman numerals you have here. (fabrications were always more ...
Jul 4, 2014 -
Re: Capitalism Bites
Hello, love! Aurora here with a quick review for you! Ahem. I didn't understand really any of this poem until I read the last two lines. I still haven't decided ...
Jul 4, 2014 -
Re: Worship Of Me
Hello, love. Aurora here with a quick review for you :). Just a suggestion: your second and sixth lines end with 'us', and therefore rhyme. I think making maybe your ...
Jul 4, 2014 -
Re: The Anxious Taxidermist
Hello, love! Aurora here with a quick review for you! Nitpicks first. He was essentially afraid of everything. The 'essentially' is un-needed here. End of nitpicks. Alright. While I love ...
Jul 4, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 61-62 (Revised)
Hello, love! Aurora here with a quick review for you. Nitpicks first: Then he dug about inside it and pulled out a pair of leather boots much like his own. ...
Jul 4, 2014