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  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Flame

    Hello! This is a beautifully written poem with vivid imagery and a powerful message. The metaphor of a flame flickering in the wind is used to represent the resilience and ...

    Apr 8, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Let Critics Have Their Way with Me

    Hello! This is a poignant and heartfelt poem about the vulnerability and pain that can come with creative expression, particularly when it is met with criticism and rejection. The use ...

    Apr 8, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Science Re: A Spider's Place

    Hello! "A fresh white petal" suggests a sense of newness and purity. The use of the word "fresh" implies that the petal has just been plucked or fallen recently, and ...

    Apr 8, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Angry Like This

    Hello! This text appears to be a poem or a free verse expressing the speaker's anger and frustration towards someone who has caused them to feel this way. The use ...

    Apr 8, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I wish I could depart my heart from yours

    Hello! This is a beautiful and poignant piece of writing. The use of imagery and sensory details effectively sets the scene of autumn and harvest, creating a peaceful and nostalgic ...

    Apr 7, 2023
  • Other » General, Other Re: Love Is Love

    Hello! This passage is a heartfelt and personal letter addressed to Sir Ian, expressing the writer's experience as an asexual person and their appreciation for the LGBTQ* community. The writer ...

    Apr 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Humor, Health Re: gasoline killed me

    Hello! This passage appears to be a dark and disturbing reflection on the speaker's experience of inhaling gasoline, which has caused them serious harm and possibly death. The language is ...

    Apr 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: cracks in the sidewalk

    Hello! This passage is a contemplative reflection on the impermanence of life and the challenges of growing up. The author uses simple yet evocative language to create a sense of ...

    Apr 7, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: little sour-dough girl

    Hello! This passage appears to be a creative and emotionally charged piece of writing. It uses rich and vivid imagery to convey the speaker's sense of betrayal and bitterness towards ...

    Apr 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: i wish you could hear my voice, even as i cry at my desktop

    Hello! This piece of writing is an emotional and introspective expression of the speaker's longing for their lost love. The use of repetition throughout the poem reinforces the speaker's desire ...

    Apr 6, 2023
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Eyes

    Hello! This letter appears to be a personal message addressed to Sir Ian McKellen, praising his work in theatre and film and expressing empathy and understanding for the struggles he ...

    Apr 6, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Storybook Sun (First Chapter)

    Hello! This passage paints a vivid picture of a scene unfolding in a courtyard, as seen from a balcony. The author uses descriptive language to evoke imagery and create a ...

    Apr 6, 2023
  • Poetry » Theatre, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Theater

    Hello! This is a brief but evocative poem that captures the anticipation and atmosphere of a live performance. The imagery of the scarlet curtains, rows of seats, and programs scattered ...

    Apr 6, 2023
  • Short Story » General, Horror Re: Angel

    Hello! This is a dark and suspenseful story that involves a murder, and it is divided into two parts. In the first part, a group of people accidentally push a ...

    Apr 5, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Bubblegum

    Hello! This piece of writing you wrote is a poignant reflection on the experience of growing up, losing oneself, and ultimately finding freedom. The imagery of the pebbled parking lot ...

    Apr 5, 2023


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