TheCardsHaveNoMemory

I liked this poem. :) It's cool, and it makes you feel very happy inside. I'm a little curious about this line here: "dancing with pretty young things with big ...

Wow. A true poet. I never, in my life, thought I could ever come close to liking a spider. This poem has switched the perspective and totally painted them in ...

Holy crap, I just got chills. Please tell me this is fiction?! But I'm not saying this in a negative way, You can really write! And rhyme! And scare the ...

Wow, i love this poem! It's so cool, I feel like these are actual song lyrics. I really thought for a second that here: "You keep the fire burning in ...

I like this poem. It's very expressive, and pretty, and dramatic. That said, I cannot stress enough exactly how much proper grammar would really compliment this poetic piece. You could ...

This is such a beautifully sad poem. I would tell you the parts I really enjoyed, but I'd basically be quoting the whole poem back to you. :) My one ...

We've all met that person who hides their true personality till later. :) I'll be honest, at first I thought you were describing a demon-possessed person... I had to scroll ...

I LOVED this. It's so strong, and bold, mutinous. Maybe the reason I like it so much is because I used to be in this situation myself, and I can ...

Ok, I'm officially creeped out, lol. I really enjoyed reading this, despite the goosebumps. )) There were a few lines that I particularly liked, for instance, "Hairy legs beat like ...

First of all, I really enjoyed this! The rhythm really was great. So great that I thought I would maybe offer up my idea of this becoming a song? It ...

Okay, so, the beginning was really good, and through out the poem i felt like i was reading it in color. . . but through the middle and on to ...