ThatAndalite

Brilliant, once again! Love it. Complete thoughts this time, though it had a lot less emotion (as I feel) than the prologue. Or not. Ellie seems pretty ticked and sad ...

I can't help but think that I've read this before. It may be a de ja vu moment, but it may not be. I'm not entirely sure. But here's my ...

This, for me, is an accurate representation of how I feel as far as cutting. I feel that this is the truth, the one letter that the rest of the ...

Okay, so first off, you got pretty damn excited in the beginning. There's more than a few run-on sentences that need fixing. Later on, there's apostrophes in words they don't ...

Beautiful, simply beautiful. I have so many questions about the light, though. It's so strange! And how it helped Imran, I don't quite understand. Did it boost his strength a ...

Damn, that was amazing! Is this.. are the lights aliens of some kind? And where are they from? I just have so many questions, this was so exciting! I didn't ...

Not sure if British, or US.. The apostrophes/quotation marks are confusing me on this one. But otherwise, great work! I would love to know more about this stranger, by the ...

Beautiful work. I didn't go over it as far grammar/spelling go, but here's what I thought; It's not clear what the characters are in the beginning, not at all. Perhaps ...

I think Nicol got all of your errors already, hahaha! Also, I see you got a little excited at some points and forgot your spaces. Never forget your spaces. Overall, ...

The words really make you a part of this one - I really felt like I was standing there and watching! However, I did find a few errors. One of ...

Beautifully written - I say this to just about anything I see on this site, but this time I really mean it. You did a great job on this work. ...

Excuse this review, comment, whatever, but oh my god. This.. this is the stuff. It's like the "For Sale, Baby shoes, Never used" thing but more morbid. Grotesque, even. I ...

The imagery pops at me like a novella would! My gosh, you wrote this amazingly! The visuals, each que, the list of demands, everything is great. Pants and sealed water ...

Heartbreaking - that's my word for this piece. I would have loved to hear about more from when Harold and Edith were younger and what their love was like then, ...

Beautifully written! I couldn't describe this as anything more than supercalifragilistic--naw, too long. But it is amazing. I, like Maddie, had to keep checking the ages on the kids too. ...