Thalizar

I can tell something is obviously bugging you and it's obviously someone you love. There are, and I'm sorry, a few issues that I found. "Because my soul and yours ...

VERY CLEVER! Short, quick, witty, I loved it! Funnily, that wasn't what I expected, I was expecting something like a zombie loving a girl and it being unrequited etc. etc. ...

It's obvious you're a fan of T.Minchin! Your avatar picture to the lyrics in the story! However, despite our common love of him, I must admit, I found a few ...

Hello! Thalizar here! I loved it, very blunt but very in depth at the same time. It's a little paradox and I love that. It can be read on the ...

Hello! Thalizar here! I love the style, it's so mysterious and gripping. I was entertained throughout and I couldn't put my laptop down! Even for something that seems like it ...

Hey! Thalizar Here! Honestly, this is one of the best poems I've read in a while. It's got rhythm, fluency and a story. I didn't check for rhymes, but I ...

Hey! Thalizar here! I like this, for a first poem. You say you're only eleven so I'll let a few things slide. It's already been said that most poems are ...

Hey! I loved it! I love how, unlike other monsters, he is scared to scare. It is obviously symbolic (even if you didn't mean it to be, which is very ...

Short and Sweet, I like it, however; we talk together at the airport Does this need to be here? I think just once is fine we walk together at the ...

Nice, as TabbyGirl has already mentioned it will be nice to give Hufflepuff some credit, along with a piece of Ravenclaw maybe? No spelling mistakes from what I could see, ...

Wow, for a 10 year old that's awesome. To be honest it was quite funny and I know that's not what he was aiming for but still. For review purposes ...

Excellent, I love it. The suspense is kept all the way through. In my opinion I thought it was an accident that caused something to happen to the person's face, ...

Hey Blift, I'm new here on YWS so this review may seem a bit harsh or odd. Haha. Anyway, it's a review none-the-less. Overall I think the story is a ...