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Re: Cursed to the Bones
Without an iota of doubt, I have new found respect for you. In so many years I have known you, never knew this part of you. Now to review. Imagery: ...
Nov 30, 2013 -
Re: Relief
This is a very interesting piece. It seems well thought out and the rhythm is also well thought out. Now to review.... Word choice: I have to say that the ...
Jul 2, 2013 -
Re: Don't Tell Me
I don't know why but when I read this piece it makes me smile. I find it cynical to some extent. The poem is both objective and subjective at the ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Dramatic Monologue (can't think of a title!)
When I read this write-up, all I see in my head are sensuous images. It seems like you have expressed the agony of love in words. I really have deep ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Stolen Thoughts
The poem is subtle with an undertone of 'righteous' anger right at the end. I like it. You have managed to do what most writers find difficult to do. You ...
Sep 2, 2012 -
Re: Stolen Thoughts
The poem is subtle with an undertone of 'righteous' anger right at the end. I like it. You have managed to do what most writers find difficult to do. You ...
Sep 2, 2012 -
Re: Ressurection
It's an interesting poem. Fascinating. The voice is solemn and subtle. The words convey an image which resonates with strength. There is definitely rhythm which carries the reader along. On ...
Sep 2, 2012 -
Re: Wisdom
First of all, I respect your views! There are refined and mature. Although I disagree with your understanding on the message. Anyways, that's another topic. The poem is strong and ...
Jul 22, 2012 -
Re: Drowning voices
It's a beautiful poem- raw, pure and soulful. However in my opinion it looks simple. You have such an interesting concept and would be beautiful if you went all out ...
Apr 13, 2012 -
Re: The Well of Knowledge
Hi there! I like this a lot. It made a lot of sense. The word choices were spot on, depicting very sensuous imagery of the message you're passing across in ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Rhythm
HI there! The poem is a good one but I would have to agree with Tayla. I couldn't quite get the theme of the poem. Despite that, The imagery is ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Insanity is not the end
Hi there! This was a good piece. I like the fact that the theme of your poem is controversial (in my opinion.) I love your word choice and diction; it ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: Forlorn
This, Baron is flawless! From the very first words to the last. You took a cliche topic and told it in a distinct and remarkable way. Your word choices have ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: Waiting
Hello. I love this piece, it was short and witty. I love your word choice, to me it sounded playful and vibrant. Although in my opinion, there wasn't much imagery. ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Portrait of a Healing Heart
Interesting. This piece strangely aroused my curiosity of the type of person you are. It made me question what kind of mind you truly possess. The diction sounded antique. I ...
Sep 16, 2011
