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I quite understan you poem bro,its better if i dont have a feverdream in my life.if i may stress the poem was too fast,i belive u needed it to be ...

Your review is certainly not harsh at all,i quite expected such not praises.Well thanks,i'll make adjustments :D :)

I know its quite hard to undrstand,I was just trying out something new,Thanks man!

Thank you,the "i's" and the "y's" was my mistake,i posted it on facebook for my friends to see,its quite common there for shorthand words,Again thank! :)

thanks,my blutant mistake

Yes sir

THANK YOU,ITS FROM MATERS LIKE YOU I LEARNED THIS TRADE FROM

I am truely happy with your words,you inspire me

"This is actually my first review on science fiction,I'm a fan of science fiction but i haven't got the guts to make a review,For fear of misinterpretation.AND MY REVIEW GOES ...

Every smile is one of a kind,yes now I'm convinced the one on my face is five of a kind.If i were you,i would have added the anta(opposite),to this poem,"I ...

Yay!,some beauty of sort

Oooh,beauty as i really is a beautiful work.But("But" is a neccessity in life),with a rather obstrutive enjambment,the work looks rather archaic,but also its beautiful and yes,the commas would help al

Wow,lovely idea behind your work.its my favourite;talking facts and truth rather that fantasies and lies(tumbs up).Poetry potray ideas in artistic way,and your work has ideas,it hasn't artistic enchan

Take our bones.make us new!!!,even the title itself seems poetry enough,great job.For me,and for u.Your words grant hope.......LETS BEND AND NOT BREAK(magnificent!)...Just keep writing and fill our ey