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Taylorb1997

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Interrobang Awareness

    So first I like the poem over all and I really like it's humor. It's a light as well as informational which is always refreshing when reading a multitude of ...

    Nov 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Fantasy Re: An Escape from Asphalt and Engines

    I honestly love this poem. Your writing style is that of someone who really understands literature and literary devises, much unlike a lot of young poets. The imagery in the ...

    Oct 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Nightmare

    Hello! When writing poetry creativity as well as emotion are the two elements that should always be addressed first. I know this is a very personal subject and criticism regarding ...

    Oct 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: a waiter for love

    I really love short poems and they can be very powerful when executed right. My only issue with your poem is that it doesn't immediately shock me with that powerful ...

    Oct 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Dear Forgotten

    Hey! I like the emotion that you convey in this poem but I think you need to work on a few things. If you're going to tell someone how somthing ...

    Oct 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: In remembrance of the forgotten

    Hey it's Taylor! I really liked this poem, honestly. It sounded very mature and from what you wrote, like it came from with in you. I love the transitioning between ...

    Oct 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: The Help of My Countenance

    First of all I like the direction this is going. I like the spiritual aspect of it and the way it's written works but if it is going to be ...

    Oct 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: My silent school war.

    I honestly love this poem. It has such a good balance between childish expression and duplication of school, mixed with deeper emotion. You cover the actual part of the poem ...

    Oct 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: Realistic Fantasy

    First of all I enjoy the enthusiasm for your idea and the pride you seem to feel for your writing, don't give up on this it is invaluable to your ...

    Oct 5, 2014


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