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Tay01

Tay01

  • Other » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Adam

    Wow this is quite different. It's an odd story. I understood everything, read everything and looked up everything but the story suddenly did not make sense at the end. I ...

    Jan 6, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Lecture

    Hello, Tay01 here. First, before I start I want to give yo a warm welcome to the Young Writers Society (YWS). As always, everybody here is as happy as anything ...

    Jan 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: TFoA - Chapter 18

    Hello, Tay01 here with a review about your little chapter 18. To start with, this is rather creative. I really loved your ideas, paragraphs elaborated properly and all about the ...

    Jan 6, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Can I call this love

    Hello, this is Tay01, one of Young Writers Society's new member. Well, to start with, this poem is as always, of course full of love. Have you poured out all ...

    Jan 6, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: So, like, if I could sing people would like me?

    Hello, Tay01 here with a review of your poetry. Well, to start with, this poetry is kind of weird. ( sorry if I start hurting your feelings ) This poetry ...

    Jan 6, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Console

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    Jan 5, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Happy New Year

    Well this is actually quite good, although it's quite late. Though it was long ago ( five days ago ) reading this makes me feel like I am back at ...

    Jan 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The View from Here

    Hello Tay01 here with a little review about your dramatic and narrative poetry. Well overall, I kind of like it. It is ( if you know what it is ) ...

    Jan 5, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: In the Rain

    I really liked this poem "In the Rain". It sounds quite magical when you opened the box though but it did not matter. Anyway, there is not too much to ...

    Jan 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chapter 1 Splitter Splatter

    Wow this is just amazing, simply amazing. You fully described the entire situation until I could feel as if I was in that four bedroom three bathroom house. You said ...

    Jan 4, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Lost

    Not too bad actually. I do not think that you are losing your passion in writing ( unless you wrote way better before ) but I think you just need ...

    Jan 4, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Fanfiction Re: Respect Women

    Hello prettypraty2000, I have quite a few reviews and comments about your poetry. I hope you would not mind to read because it is quite simple. First, this is a ...

    Jan 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: the day i escaped part1

    Hello here with a review about you story. You must certainly pay attention because it makes your story different and more attractive than before. Your creativity is not bad. But ...

    Jan 3, 2015


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