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Re: Dreams
Your welcome!
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: Feverdreams
The sound of the sea etc. is a random element, the middle of the dream, inserted not to make sense. as for switching air and breath, this would destroy an ...
Dec 20, 2013 -
Re: Kagaku
Your welcome!
Dec 20, 2013 -
Re: Here Be Dragon
I don't drink! (-: realy!
Dec 18, 2013 -
Re: Description
Brilliant! Sorry, should have made that clear. (-:
Dec 18, 2013 -
Re: This other Eden.
Hello! Now I have extended this work. :-)
Dec 17, 2013 -
Re: The Man Who Regrets
When you know they will never leave you But you changed your mind And you saved them All 2.47 billion Of them The man who regrets No longer needing to ...
Dec 17, 2013 -
Re: Paradise
This other Eden :-)
Dec 17, 2013 -
Re: The Windows to Your Soul
This has good repetition, emphasized by the last line. It has a random-ish rhyme structure, which reflects the subject matter. I don't know what sappy means, at a guess it ...
Dec 17, 2013 -
Re: Siblings
Oh Yes!
Dec 17, 2013 -
Re: The Man Who Regrets
You have done well, but you definatly need to pick up on punctuation and capitals.
Dec 17, 2013 -
Re: Acrostic Poem #1
You-sa welcome!
Dec 16, 2013 -
Re: Description
This is strange
Dec 16, 2013 -
Re: Demi Paradise
If you liked this I recommend my other short! [grin]
Dec 14, 2013 -
Re: Demi Paradise
That's ok, thank you for shopping at burger king, enjoy your meal. :-)
Dec 14, 2013