TakeThatYouFiend

Does it mean go blue?

Thanks! The rock/sea metaphor is a stationary person in lots of moving shoppers! :-) The spread outhing must have been a glitch-I can't see it. :-)

Thanks! (That should be are there any, not is. I am nit-picky. )

Who said absence was relative? Mearly similar nothings.

Cons-1 This is mearly my style for this particular work. 2 The flow is rough, to reflect the nightmare feel, this my personal experience. Thanks! :-)

Yeah, it's a half rhyme! I hoped no-one would notice! :-)

Admral Ackbar!

Thanks! Great quote-have you read the Screwtape Letters by C.S.Lewis? It was certainly a most revolutionary book for me. :-)

Yet the metaphoric directions are relative to a metaphorical gravity.

By the way, what is your faith?

Thanks! I, as the poem suggests, am strongly Christian, so making the poem general would be against my personal message, no offence.

:-)

:-) :-) :-)

*mouth full* you're *nom* welcome *nom*!

Thanks! (You didn't actually like it though)