TakeThatYouFiend

You should post a link to this in God has More Followers :)

I sing But it don't make me popular :-)

True, but it can still be offensive, because the insult has derived from the condition.

The following ain't a review, cause there ain't enough to criticize :-) I'd just like to give a little advice on rhyme. Firstly, keep on rhyming. Secondly, play around with ...

I won't tell a lie, this didn't crack me up. But it sure is damn funny :-)

Look on the sidebar when you are on the work. There should be an EDIT button.

Thanks for the feedback! If you post any more works like this tell me, and I'll review them, there are far too few lyrics on here, particularly those I actually ...

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I'll deal with some of them once I get on a computer, but to clarify the meaning of that line, "'Vause she's looking for a - live a little - ...

It is generally accepted in lyrics that you can just have plain text :-)

If you remind me I'll review this when I can. Yours, An aspiring lyricist.

Mainly just made up :)

Mainly just made up :)

Btw this was my Terry Jacks impression :-)

And this, ladys and gentlemen, is Pomps doing a quick review :-) thanks for those typos :) The second line of each verse is a little longer than the first ...