TakeThatYouFiend

A nice cheerful story to start of the new year! Seriously though, this was practically professional! I wouldn't be surprised to find this published in a magazine! I am also ...

I would disagree with the review below me, I think this is a very nice piece of poetry. First though I wish to make a disclaimer: not only have I ...

P.S. like the title!

I am not quite sure what this is (in terms of type of work), which makes reviewing kinda hard, not knowing what to write about. But this is woefully under ...

Hello. I have just come here from one of your other works, and I saw your extremely long list of extra items. And, me being the egocentric king that I ...

Very muchly well done. :-) First of all I am very glad you decided to use rhyme. It gives the poem a sort of romantic feeling. However I notice you ...

Like the poem! This has good rhythm, and contains some very nice lines, namely "Love cannot be set aside for fear, or else you can expect the silent tear." I ...

This is nice, especially the unexplained reason for stepping out at night. My favorite line was "Swallows flew accros a berry yogurt sky," (at a guess it was your's too, ...

Hello! Just come here from humming bird. And, although I prefer humming bird, I quite like this too. I like it because, when you wantedto, you use words to convey ...

Well done on this poem. Like the serif typeface. For the most part this poem made sense to me. There was one line however, "as we create our own judgement ...

Well done! I would have reviewed it earlier, however the moment was not opportune. I must say, you are very good at these. Almost the lack of need for clarity ...

Hello Alf (for short), here are your top three: 1-The length. I don't know why, but this seems to me to be the perfect length for this poem. 2-The content. ...

Wow! Well done Kitty Bee! Here is a long list of good things. The title drew me in to this. I don't know what's so good about but it did. ...

Well done, Fat Cow Sis, what a pity your losing battle of the sexes! (Mwahahahaha) :-) Firstly I must say that it isn't necessary to apologise for the length. I ...

The poem itself is very nice. It contains a nice rhythm, due to a combination of a consistent sentence length, and repetition. I especially liked the last line, "and I ...