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Thank you both, your comments and advice will help a lot :)

I see what you mean but I wanted it to sound like another person but thank for the review :)

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Thank you this is really helpful. Thank you, I am now following you :) ( I love the word superfluous to).

Thank you so much you just made my day :)

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Will do :)

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thanks this is really helpful thank you. plus I am not good at this but I hope I get better and this will help thanks

Thanks I just wanted some thing random to do and I did not know about the points you hade to spend now I am working on longer short storys.

that's ok writing can be depressing at times and so can lie