Swarnima

hello! Well I loved it! This is a novel topic to write a short story on. So I am really impressed by your choice of subject! The reference to cartoon ...

Hello! About the emotion talked about in earlier reviews I would like to say that your 1st para is really good.. both on the emotion and tempo part. The rest ...

hello! Well this is a wonderful poem..... exact and full.. that's the kind of poem I love! "and the counterpoint of birdsong and water—" That's a wonderful thought! The only ...

hi here's my review.:) I loved how you separated the lines you wanted to emphasize upon. But I did not like the format you used in the paragraphs,it would be ...

Hey I would like to give you my review.. The idea and object you chose were nice. As for the error, it is not something not said before but the ...

I really have to say that your poem was just deep and soothing for my mind. Truly loved it. You know if you use punctuation in your breakages they will ...

hey here's my review... I loved the rhythm in the poem. It was also good because of the neat little paragraphs you have put it in. "The butterflies may have ...

It is amazing! You have written a very emotional story beautifully..... Your words actually gave me the dramatic feelings of seeing someone going through all that.. The title you chose ...

hey here's my review... I am new here, so.... u know...:) The flow of the poem is good although the rhyming seemed a little forced at times. You conveyed your ...