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Thanks muchy to everyone who reviewed this. I'm now off to revise it :). And Snoink... that has got to be one of the... imaginative... crits I have ever recieved ...

In fact, some male lions eat their baby cubs. So really your story right now makes no sense. Lions don't eat their own cubs. They kill the cubs of other ...

I like it - it's intriguing, in that it opens up just enough to catch our interesst, to want to know a little bit more, without revealing everything. Although I'm ...

No no, it's perfectly alright to say 'fuck' (or any other swear word) in a literary piece (or your blog). Anyways, on the poem - it feels rather simplistic (probably ...

I - personally - feel the pace is fine, and I'm enjoying the way in which the mystery is slowing being revelaed to us. At times, however, it feels as ...

Brad, thanks for the feedback 8). Like I said, I know very little about poetry. Unlike with fiction, where I can avoid cliches quite easily, I'm not really sure what ...

I like clowns... Y'know, I never noticed thw whole 'open ended thing' before. You'd think I would, seeing as I'm the one writing the stories, but you're right. Some of ...

You don't like clowns?

Surreal 8). BTW, I noticed this... The smell was terrible and effected Anikyru instantly. Shouldn't it be 'affected'?

I was bored :).

Thanky muchy for the reviewy :). I've fixed the 'dreamlike' and the 'just lay still' 8). On Sarah being afraid, have you ever noticed that little children are generally not ...

Heh, I'm in the liking of this here begining (is there going to be more?). The downside? I'm actually rather confused about the whole scientist thingy :P.

Ooh, I like it so far. Not a lot to go on, but this seems well written. And tis great there's an agent who has shown interest in it 8).

Nice ^_^. Although, what copyrights did Skipping Stones buy? Or haven't they said?

'T was very good. Definatly worth a read.