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I've never seen such interesting characters for a short story. This was well-done, just a few notes. It had an eerie, and shall I say, ambiguous feel to it. You ...

Thank you sooo much for your reviews! No, fortunately I haven't been in the same circumstances as Jane/Imogen. But I have enjoyed writing her character!

Thank you!

I really liked this chapter, and Val's hatred against your mc finally makes sense! Good job! Can't wait to read more!

Aww, I've been on this for less than year! I really like this poem, and I agree YWS is best. I'm so glad I found it. How long has this ...

Thanks! Chap 2 will be up in the next couple days! %uD83D%uDC9A

Wow. This was good, every little word you use wraps the reader up in the story. I don't have a single complaint, great job and please keep writing!

Thankssssss!! I appreciate it a lot :) The next chapter I show more of the character's pasts and stuff.

Hmm, I like the word flow you have. There was also nice imagery, good job!

Sorry this is supposed to be chapter 1

I'd suggest proofreading since you seem to have many errors. You also switch povs, which is a major writing no no. You as a writer show much potential. Just beware ...

It's an interesting subject. Majorrrrr cliffhanger! I did notice punctuation errors and style errors, but the story itself shows potential!

Thanks! Welcome YWS! I'm new here too, and I think you're gonna like it here.

Very nice imagery. And it flows very well. It also gives a hint on Grim's back story. I only noticed one error which was "trul" instead of truly. Overall, good ...

Thank you! Oh and trust I knew exactly what you were referencing about!