Sunshine101

Wow! I really liked this! The writing and a rhyming was perfect and I mean PREFECT! I'm so jealous that you're able to do this and succeed.i love the analogies ...

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Thnx for the review! About the confusing part in the begining... I am going to have a chapter/part where the character goes back to the begining of the sleepover. I ...

Sorry guys...I think there are some typos...

Thank you so much!

Wow, what a cute poem! I loved this very much and it was simply beautiful. Keep up the awesome work!

Wow. The emotion flows PERFECTLY. One reason why I adore your writing is because of it's originality. Who else would write "Have I ever let you in on the secret ...

Loved this piece. In some way, this is inspiring. I loved how you put ownership on the word "trees" and how you described every word with vivid detail. I had ...

I love what you are trying to do here. This poem is simply beautiful and I honestly enjoyed it. There are some spelling mistakes but I think that the other ...

Wow. Just amazing. I've read other pieces by you but this is just amazing. I adore the way you describe your relationship with your father. It's so original and that's ...

I love what you did here! You wrote you thoughts down, that I too think about, and gave everyone a reminder that life isn't about looks. You did it in ...

Beautiful. Just beautiful. You wrote down what I tend to think about everyday, and you couldn't have done a better job. Please post more!

Wow! What a strong and powerful poem. You wrote this beautifully and I was mesmerized as you pulled me into the swirling pile of beautiful words. I would love to ...