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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Echo

    Weird is good Twiggers! Thanks for all your reviews I appreciate it to all measures!

    Oct 9, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The girl who speaks to trees

    Thanks for the reviews!!! I wasn't the most confident in this story so I'm glad to hear all your positive thoughts!!! As for this sentance " I suppose I'm not," ...

    Oct 5, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [11]

    I would NEVER have enough patience to write a novel like this. I finally get the name to!!! YOU ROCK!

    Oct 2, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Taboo [1]

    Yeah so I know this has been out for a bit but i see new chapters come out once in awhile so I finally decided to check it out! I ...

    Oct 2, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Long Fuzzy Socks

    The poem was so cute! The flow of it was a bit choppy but then again you'd have to be a super writer to make a long sock poem totally ...

    Oct 2, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Dragon.

    I liked it so much! I liked how you left the story off like that so the readers can think of how the story should end.

    Oct 2, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Dear Humans,

    No this wasn't a science paper ( I'd get A good grade, tho!). I was just watching the leafs and it struck me! Anyway yeah I guess you could call ...

    Sep 28, 2010
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Draco's first Murder!

    Aw! This is cute in a messed up Draco Malfoy kind of way. I think you hit it right on the nob! the beggining is pretty unclear though. Did you ...

    Sep 27, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Dear Humans,

    * joyful squel* Thanks for the reviews guys! Personally, I think the parentheses bring out Mother Nature's charecter. I love any reviews though!!! Also I added an address because I ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Bella's 30th Birthday

    I like both parts of this story alot! I'm not a huge Twilight fan ( weak female leads annoy me). You SERIOUSLY need to write more! The world of Twilight ...

    Sep 25, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Vamyre Hunter

    Ok well thanks guys. I know this is a bit vague witha overly repeated last sentance, but I do appreciate the comments. Later i'll write a part 2 to clear ...

    Sep 25, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Old Tree

    There's not really much left for me to say. ( thanks guys!) My only thing is that the ending just kinda feel off. It bothered me. Keep on writin'!

    Sep 25, 2010
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: It's The Muggle Way, Dumbledore

    * strokes imaginary beard* I must say it's very interesting. You obviously know what your talking about. ( It's been years since i read Harry Potter). I could FEEL J.K ...

    Sep 25, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Aztec

    Wow. It leaves that echo feeling after I read it. I feel like your really an Aztec telling your story. I'm too Shell-shocked to say many bad things...

    Sep 23, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Dear You.

    You say that this is the worst story in the universe? Poppycock!!!! This is very inside the charecters head. I'd write more but they have everything covered!:) Greatly written!

    Sep 23, 2010


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