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Re: I see humans, but no humanity.
Sunflower here for a quick review! Oh My GOODNESS! This poem was heart wrenching and really just painful in the best way possible. The wording, the rhymes were all smooth ...
Feb 8, 2024 -
Re: roses are red [just like the blood i spilt over you]
SUnflower here for a quick review! Wow just wow! This poem was absolutely amazing during pretty much every single part, it gave me chills multiple times through. Not only was ...
Feb 8, 2024 -
Re: The Whistling Voice
Hi Sunflower here for a quick review! So I thought that this was a pretty interesting little Halloween story, I'm kind of a sucker for spooky stuff so this definitely ...
Oct 2, 2023 -
Re: in the mirror i saw my life’s erosion
Sunflower here for a quick comment. This hit way too hard for me. While I personally don't deal with the fear of aging in the beauty sense I do have ...
Mar 23, 2023 -
Re: Dark Moon Prophecies Ch.1
Sunflower here for a quick review. So I'm slightly confused by where you're going with this story and I have a few critiques. 1) This story has a bad case ...
Mar 23, 2023 -
Re: Nighttime
Sunflower here for a quick review! So this poem was absolutely wonderful and your use of words was perfect. It felt so genuine and real that it was almost painful ...
Mar 3, 2023 -
Re: It was never truth that hurt
Hi, Sunflower here for a quick review! So I really REALLY liked this poem, mainly because it spoke to me a lot. I love how well this poem captured the ...
Feb 17, 2023 -
Re: A Little Mercy
Hi, sunflower here for a quick review! So I honestly don't have much to say about this piece other than the fact I absolutely adored it! This poem just displayed ...
Feb 12, 2023 -
Re: The AI war
Hello Sunflower here for a quick (probably not) review! So I would like to state before I begin my critique that I found your story immensely and I will in ...
Jan 10, 2023 -
Re: War Beasts Chapter 1
Sunflower here for a quick( probably not lol) review! So I found this story to be quite interesting though I would like to get to the negatives before I get ...
Jan 6, 2023 -
Re: Soldier's Remorse
Hi sunflower here for a quick (and quite positive) review! This poem was absolutely fantastic! I love pretty much every single line in this poem. The helplessness but also the ...
Jan 6, 2023 -
Re: The Prison Of Perfection (Re-Imagined)
Sunflower here for a quick (probably not) review! If this essay didn't get you at least an A- then that teacher is absolutely blind because I found your piece to ...
Jan 3, 2023 -
Re: Dead or Alive
Hello, Sunflower here for a quick (Well probably not) review! This poem hit me like a godang bus, in all the good and good bad ways. This whole poem felt ...
Jan 2, 2023 -
Re: my mind is held captive by angry poachers
. Sunflower here for a quick review! . . This was a rather interesting poem, at least for me. The poem starts oddly gorry with the comparison of eating ones ...
Dec 21, 2022 -
Re: the terminology of sexual assault
Sunflower here for a short review (or more of a comment I suppose) I found this to be a very interesting piece and it was very interesting to get a ...
Oct 20, 2022