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Sujana

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  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Dating the Preacher's Daughter

    Introduction Short stories with vaguely religious themes? Must be my birthday. Alright, but seriously, this sort of thing only comes along every 15 years or so. You could call me ...

    Oct 5, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Hood

    Aren't lovable rogues the best type of heroes? All of the goodness of the knight in shining armor, without any of the heavy responsibilities and loyalties to questionable figures of ...

    Oct 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: The Plan (intro)

    This is pretty short, so hopefully I can keep myself from going overboard with this. However, I keep no promises at this point since I've surprised myself more than once. ...

    Sep 30, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Emmy

    Some things before I start: Most of my reviews get confusing because the author doesn't know the standard I'm looking at their work from, so I'll just give it to ...

    Sep 30, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture Re: This world is so messed up this doesn't deserve a title

    I'm just giving likes willy-nilly today. I think I might be comfortable raising my standards just a little bit more after this, but we'll see. I haven't read the usual ...

    Jul 30, 2016
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: 'Tell Me About It' -A Letter to my Therapist

    Just so you know, I don't like things I necessarily thought were good. I've liked things that I could definitely dissect and criticize as a work, so to me the ...

    Jul 30, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: When You Up and Left Without a Word

    Moving from your last work to here, I noticed that you do have a talent in passing an emotion in your work. Your work does leave the audience feeling the ...

    Jul 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Plainface: Regime 91

    So I was reading through this work briefly, and smack dab in the middle of it all I realized something--throughout the whole work, you were using present tense. And you ...

    Jul 4, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: If I Up and Left Without a Word

    I don't know how I feel about this work. I'm a bit split between two factions in my mind--the first faction believes, truly, that this work was made with good ...

    Jul 4, 2016
  • Short Story » Satire, Science Fiction Re: The wrath of foolish choices, R.T

    Well, I'll be honest, I have yet to review a game trailer of all things. I fear reviewing this and missing the point somehow, as if this was meant to ...

    Jul 4, 2016
  • Short Story » Satire, Humor Re: The Harm of the Internet

    Me A Paragraph in: Okay, this is a sort of stupid viewpoint and I can make up a thousand reasons why the internet is great, but I'm listening. I guess ...

    Jun 30, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Out of the Rain

    Hey there, Edelweiss, it's Ellstar here to review your short story (because I can't finish my own short story wtfsdnffnfnfbufbguusoeif *explodes*) Anyway. THEY ARENT NITPICKS OKAY THEYRE VALID CONCERN

    Jun 30, 2016
  • Other » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Perfection of Love

    You know, a good portion of people think political correctness is just a way for the regressive leftists to censor the language of the people. Some people actually go out ...

    Jun 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Laaz And The Casket Game

    An interesting story. I had a feeling something like this might've happened, as the name Laaz was somewhat reminiscent of the famous Lazarus, but I suppose in this case it ...

    Jun 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Horror Re: Another Zombie Novel Prologue part 2

    So moving on from part one to part two, I'm still wondering a bit about what went wrong--I mean, not that anything went wrong objectively speaking, but subjectively speaking it ...

    Jun 28, 2016


When she transformed into a butterfly, the caterpillars spoke not of her beauty, but of her weirdness. They wanted her to change back into what she always had been. But she had wings.
— Dean Jackson